Reviewer: Euphrates
Date: 11/18/07 8:33
Chapter: Chapter 1--Harry

*grins* That's an amazingly sweet poem. I love it. It seems simple, yet I know it must have taken a ton of work, and I think you've done a really great job. My only nitpick would be - why is Harry thinking about them, both dead in the future? Not the happiest thought for a wedding...

My favorite line: ...I know that
I'll always need you around, and no one's
Love will ever replace yours. ...


Great job.

--Kate

Author's Response: I have no idea why he's thinking that, I just put it to make the letters work. It did take a ton of work! THANKSS!!!!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 11/18/07 0:28
Chapter: Chapter 1--Harry

Oh gosh why does this always happen to me? Anyway where was I?

Yeah, it reminds me of To Lily, With Love a lot and I'm really happy that you're writing again.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 11/18/07 0:24
Chapter: Chapter 1--Harry

I Love You Ginny And I Will Do So Forever.

Awww Jen, how sweet. Harry's character seemed just a little ff but I don't thimk anyone but a big characterization nitpick like mne would notice it. Also this reminde me of my poem, To Lily, W

Author's Response: *squeeeeee*

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 11/17/07 14:31
Chapter: Chapter 1--Harry

How sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: LadyBrockdorf1
Date: 11/17/07 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 1--Harry

I think I have it. I love you Ginny and I will do so forever. I like it! Good job. :)

Author's Response: *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* Yay! First review!

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