MADE ME MAD :(
GINNY DIED!!!!!!!!!! WHAT?? YOUR INSANE
Wait what happened in the end? Did ginny come back to like what about lily James Sirius and Remus ... Fantastic story tho
it was sad, sweet, and funny when lily and grindewald was talking
it was different but yet enjoyable.wish the ending hadnt been so confusing
i think the way you wrote this is interesting.so far i have enjoyed it!
You should have written more. Or a sequel. This was good. Really good. I wish there was more! Please write more.
i dont get the ending, what happened????
i love it
what are you talking about that was my favorite story of yours it was amazing it would have been better without the canon errors but other than that...
i did like the story but not the ending you could have put more into the last chapter or added an eppilouge to explain it all
I adore this story. I really do. < 3
The ending was good except i'm not sure what Lily meant by saying Harry wasn't dead anymore. Did they all come back to life? Did harry join them in the spirit world?
Haven't reviewed for a few chapters so in summary, Grindelwald! great idea, and i know it's probably spelt wrong, Narcissa Malfoy is a sap, poor poor Luna and How stupid is Hermione to go out alone near the forest where she knows the death eaters have been hiding out? Also, could Dumbledore not evict the death eaters? or at least put protective enchantments around the borders of the forest to prevent students being taken?
Just like Dumbledore, steam roller them into it. This was great, especially when James mentioned keeping his cool, a true marauder.
Dumbledore has some seemingly insane ideas, but this takes the biscuit! However, as most of his ideas work, I'll give him the benefit of the doubt. Great chapter, especially Lily's outburst.
I love the title of this chapter, it implies cosiness, but is in fact the opposite. Where's Madam Pince? I'm glad Ron turned up. And what's the deliberate mistake? I'm going to go mad now because i didn't spot it.
How awful, but Dumbledore himself said that they must keep fighting to hold evil at bay, so why now is he holding them back? I'm glad Cedrick was there fore Cho, not that this gives peace, James and Lily are together with their friends and aren't at rest, not yet anyway.
It's really hard to imagine Voldemort running after Harry. I'm glad Bellatrix is out of the picture, that's one person I'd not like to meet in a dark alley. I like that they levitated Ginny's wand just out of reach as though taunting her. Are the James and Lily from the wand just echos or are they the same James and Lily watching over Harry?
You see, this is what you get for not sticking in at occlumency lessons. How else would they know he liked Ginny if not by spying on his thoughts? Can't spirits send messages to the living, couldn't the marauders, I'm including Lily, spy on the death eaters from beyond and report back to Dumbledore? In fact, why can't the hogwarts ghosts spy? They're capable of becoming invisible. And how did the death eaters get to Ginny in the Gryffindore tower? Dumbledore needs to further up security. Sorry, I just hate things being less than perfect. I'm a happily ever after seeker, so sue me.