Fred's death in DH hit me hard too, I really liked him alot. Parts of your poem touch me on a more personal note, I think everyone can relate to it because everyone has lost someone at some time. Thanks.
Oh, wow. This is so incredibly sad...I LOVED the ending. Also, I really liked this line:
"Take him with you, and my soul with him!"
Great job! This nearly made my cry. Keep writing!
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*sniff* poor george!! good poem!!
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I should had been there,
I should had said goodbye.
These lines really showed George well. I think that is a really good potrayal of him.=Sammy
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I know, I thought Fred's death was the worst as well! You just full didn't see it comming ...
This is lovely, and so sad - I love how it moves from George grieving to feeling guilty that he couldn't save him; you've captured this beautifully, expecially in the last stanza.
Oh, I'd like to think he recovers, but I suppose JKR never really told us ... sigh ...
Ah well, it was still a lovely poem anyway!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know, I'd like to think he recovered too, it would break my heart if he didn't.
that was really good! i love the last line the most. i think that's exactly how goerge would have felt, since they always did everything together before.
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