Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 07/25/08 3:36
Chapter: Chapter 8: Realisation Hits the Hospital Wing

I liked the chapter. I think that you captured Remus well. I also like the patronus you chose for Madame Pomfery.

A small nitpick is that I don't think that patronus communication was used outside the Order, unless she's telling someone in the Order who works at St. Mungo's.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. Oh, okay... I wasn't thinking about that... thanks for pointing that out...

Reviewer: Hypnotica
Date: 07/23/08 20:12
Chapter: Chapter 7: A Bitter Taste of War

Good. Kind of...babbum babbum babbum, though. Like, I think the transitions could have been a bit stonger, but otherwise good. I do think that you did a good job for something like this - you know, taking a scene directly in the novel and re-creating it. Good!

Author's Response: Thanks.... wow, finally, some, how do you say it, constructive criticism? I think... Glad you thought that I did the scene recreation good. :D

Reviewer: Hypnotica
Date: 07/23/08 19:52
Chapter: Chapter 6: A Morning Mishap

Ooooohh, so cute. (And yucky! :P ROACHES YUCK! Have you seen "Mouse Trap"? It totally reminds me of that movie.)

Author's Response: Thanks! No, I haven't seen Mouse Trap... maybe I should watch it....

Reviewer: Hypnotica
Date: 07/23/08 18:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

I LURVE IT!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoy it!

Reviewer: LupinforTonks
Date: 07/08/08 10:03
Chapter: Chapter 7: A Bitter Taste of War

I can't wait to read another chapter.
It is written so well I was in the scene.
Very well done!
keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am so glad that you like it so much!rnrnBTW, I love your username!

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 07/08/08 3:31
Chapter: Chapter 7: A Bitter Taste of War

I like this chapter. The way you have Remus worrying about Tonks during the battle is realistic.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad that people find it to be real!

Reviewer: anapot
Date: 06/23/08 20:38
Chapter: Chapter 6: A Morning Mishap

Oh, I like it so much!!! Really cute!!! I can't wait to read a kiss scene!!! O.o

Your story is great!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! Don't you just love the kiss scenes?

Reviewer: pheonixfeather94
Date: 06/21/08 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 5: Doxies and Slyness

I have to say-- I love Tonks' style!!!!! The story's not bad either. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: pheonixfeather94
Date: 06/21/08 18:13
Chapter: Chapter 6: A Morning Mishap

Aww! Very cute. I'm so much like Tonks its fightening, really. Lol. Anyway, nice chapter, can't wait for you to update!

Author's Response: Thanks! Is it really that much like her? Cool! The next chapter is in the queue, so...

Reviewer: MasterBergin
Date: 06/21/08 18:01
Chapter: Chapter 6: A Morning Mishap

I like this.....There isn't really any canon material for the relationship of these two. I find it to be quite entertaining. I think you did good job with the characterization of Remus and Tonks considering there isn't much to work with.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Funny you should mention characterization, because I had to edit this chapter for Tonks, because she had had a breakdown at first, and they said it wasn't character, so... But I am glad you like it!

Reviewer: Samank
Date: 06/06/08 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

Amazing. Tonks and Lupin were always my favourite pair. You captured this moment beautifuly. I'm going to keep on reading.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That makes me feel great!

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 06/06/08 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 5: Doxies and Slyness

This is getting really interesting. I especially like your characterisation of Sirius.
~Meda~

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I feel good knowing that people actually like what I write.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 06/06/08 11:32
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dinner and... Conversation

Aw, I know, it's terrible when no one has anything "bad" to say. I hate that. I'll look closer next time, I promise! :)
-Chris

Author's Response: Hey thanks. Seriously, nothing bad? That makes me feel good...

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 06/06/08 11:20
Chapter: Chapter 5: Doxies and Slyness

Aw, this is sweet!! I love Remus and Tonks!!! Thanks for writing this well... I haven't had time to read FanFition for ages with school and track, and I'm addicted again :)
-Chris

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love them too! I am so glad that people don't hate this!

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 04/19/08 9:29
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dinner and... Conversation

woweeeeee I love this story. Too many people who write R/T just repeat the stuff we knew anyway. This is much more original. Update soon.
~Meda~

Author's Response: Thank u so much! This is like the best compliment ever. Any constructive criticism anyone??

Reviewer: moonyschick
Date: 04/05/08 18:10
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings Develop [More]

How cute! I loved the gum chewing waitress!

Author's Response: Thank u so much! Chappie four is in the queue!!! Let's hope it gets up soon!!!

Reviewer: siriusly_hg_rh
Date: 04/01/08 15:06
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings Develop [More]

Favorite story.
However please write more.
Thanks.

Author's Response: Don't worry... More is on the way!

Reviewer: Andromeda_Tonks
Date: 03/21/08 6:20
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings Develop [More]

They're so sweet. But poor them, so, so, awkward

Author's Response: Oh, it gets even MORE awkward in chapter four... trust me... MUCH MORE!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 03/20/08 17:28
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings Develop [More]

Nice :)
Keep writing, great story!

Author's Response: Gracias!!!

Reviewer: genghiskahn
Date: 03/20/08 16:14
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings Develop [More]

I like it keep it up

Author's Response: Thanksies!

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