Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 18:08
Chapter: Chapter 9: Desperation and Suspicion

At least Tonks is ok. Remus must have lots of thoughts buzzing around his head. A chaotic night and lots of worries makes for some frustration.

Author's Response: And frusteration is sooooo annoying! Plus, he is a werewolf, so that is insane enough for poor him already.

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 18:04
Chapter: Chapter 8: Realisation Hits the Hospital Wing

Madam Pomfrey has her hands full! Lots of sleeping potion too. That would be a relief after all the trouble they've been through. Remus could probably use some as well.

Author's Response: Wow! I'm so glad you reviewed everything! I don't think Remus would've been able to sleep. He would've been worrying about Tonks way too much.

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 7: A Bitter Taste of War

Noooo!!! Tonks!!! Well, we know she'll be ok but it's still sad. Poor Remus, your one true love is hurt and there is nothing you can do.

Author's Response: Did it come off as sad? Thanks again!!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 17:50
Chapter: Chapter 6: A Morning Mishap

Another yea!!! That whole cockroach thing is really disgusting though...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The cockroach thing just came to me on a whim... I was typing and then I was like, that will work.

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 17:43
Chapter: Chapter 5: Doxies and Slyness

Ooooh! Yea!!! Remus is finally starting to come to his senses!!! And the whole blue and pink thing, I would so do that. Don't think I'm wierd or anything but that makes me think of cotton candy...

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! And, it's okay... weird ish good!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 17:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

So awkward, so annoying, so frustrating. Yes, Sirius would have taken the mickey out of them (so to speak) if he had lived long enough to see them get married. Sirius is one of those people that wouldn't get tired of saying "Tonks and Remus sittin in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G..."

Author's Response: Yes, and he would be awfully annoying. I think Tonks would've slapped him after the second time. :P Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/07/08 19:55
Chapter: Chapter 4: Dinner and... Conversation

Ah, Sirius, of course he has to come in here some too. Love this chapter as well!

Author's Response: Yes, just a bit. I'm sure he would've given Remus and Tonks hell if he had lived. I'm so glad that you like it!!!!!!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/07/08 16:49
Chapter: Chapter 3: Feelings Develop [More]

I know that feeling. It's always really awkward to be around someone you like!!!

Author's Response: It is always awkward, at least when you don't know what to say. It is so annoying!!!

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/07/08 16:44
Chapter: Chapter 2: A Distraction

Gotta love Fred and George. I never get tired of them. I can't believe JK Rowling killed Fred!!! It just makes all these type of moments in the books seem less...happy...somehow.

Author's Response: Thanks again for this review! I love Fred! He was awesome. I don't understand why she killed off half of the people she did. It did nothing to the plot...

Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/07/08 16:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

Awwwww! That would be so hard!!! Knowing you love someone and then having to tell them you didn't- sorry, couldn't- love them. Life is hard enough without that on your mind!

Author's Response: Yes, very hard. And, poor Remus already feeling as bad as he does... Thanks so much for your review!!!

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 08/30/08 16:12
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

by the way... trying your advice, and if i get it up, will u review it?

Author's Response: Of course I will review it! You've reviewed my story I don't know how many times! Why wouldn't I review yours? And, I really hope that it works and is up soon! I'll look for it!

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 08/30/08 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 10: Potential Heartbreak

oh god, that was brilliant, i can't wait for more. I've been following this story for a while and was pleased when i got the email that you'd updated. Your a fantastic writer, i love how you've portrayed these two characters as i think its spot on. As i said, can't wait for more. luv ~tonkzie

Author's Response: Thank you so incredibly very much!!!!!! I don't what else to say. I am just so glad that you like it so much!!! And, thanks so much for thinking I got the characters right... I can never be too sure, until someone tells me I did. Then, that makes me feel more confident about it!!

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 08/29/08 5:16
Chapter: Chapter 10: Potential Heartbreak

I love Tonks' argument, and that she says she can understand why he is doing what he is.

I also liked her reaction to Sirus' death.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!!! I'm so glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: nutsaboutlupin
Date: 08/20/08 6:50
Chapter: Chapter 9: Desperation and Suspicion

im loving this. please add another chapter... quickly!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad that you like it! I've submitted the next chapter... MNFF hasn't validated it yet. Hopefully soon though...

Reviewer: LupinforTonks
Date: 08/16/08 6:08
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

I have jst read this story for like the 8th time and it still hasnt lost its effect
Please write another chapter

Author's Response: Wow! Eight times! That is great! Glad that you still think it is that good after eight times! I've got through chapter fifteen written, but chapter ten was rejected for like two very minor problems. Hopefully it will be up in the next few days.

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 08/07/08 12:21
Chapter: Chapter 9: Desperation and Suspicion

yay!!! finally, i've been waiting for this and now i read it i can't wait for the next one!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm hoping the next chapter will be up tomorrow...

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 08/05/08 5:44
Chapter: Chapter 9: Desperation and Suspicion

I like Remus' reaction here, and the chapter overall. Kingsley sneaking out to see them and asking about Remus holding Tonks' hand was a nice touch.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad that you like it. I'm glad that you think that those were good touches on this.

Reviewer: LupinforTonks
Date: 08/04/08 5:53
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

PLEASE write another chapter
I just can't wait
Even though I know Tonks turns out o.k it is still very tense

Author's Response: Don't worry... the other chapter is already in the queue, and I've got up to chapter fifteen written. I'm glad that you like it! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 07/31/08 8:28
Chapter: Chapter 8: Realisation Hits the Hospital Wing

omg! This is so cool! can't wait for more!! I have a RL/NT story but it keeps getting rejected and i dunno what to do. can u give any advice??

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! Glad that you like it! Um, have you recieved the e-mail telling you what corrections to make? If you have, and you've made the corrections, you might want to send an e-mail back. I had to do that for this chapter the second time it got rejected, and then they put it up. Can you tell me if that helps? I hope it does, and good luck getting it in!

Reviewer: LupinforTonks
Date: 07/30/08 9:52
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Confession

Another chapter done well.
Can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad that you like it... Chapter nine will hopefully be up in the next few days. :D

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