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Name: Allovimo (Signed) · Date: 10/31/10 16:25 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Handled beautifully!


Name: Siriussirius (Signed) · Date: 08/16/09 13:10 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Gosh, Love Sirius:D


Name: goddess of light (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 20:03 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
An excellent idea for a story! Excessively well-written and fun, too. You did an excellent job of capturing Kingsley, picking out all the hints of a considerable minor character. Your story was so good it actually felt like part of the book, not like most fan fiction. Stupendous!


Name: Wolfie Jojo (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 6:34 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Wow! I'm not entirely sure why, but I'm crying. Please don't think I'm soppy. This story is amazing, I really enjoyed it. You don't mind me printing a copy for my 'fan fic' folder, do you? Oh, and I love the last little bit, it finished the story neatly. Wow!

Author's Response: 'course, go ahead, glad you liked it:) yay, I made someone cry! (in a good way, I hope)


Name: Wolfie Jojo (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 6:25 · For: Chapter 3: Left in the Dark
Phew, Sirius is okay. Ah bless, moody is so sweet. Well, I can think of better words, but... And Remus, trying so hard to keep the peace. I really love your story, I'll add it to favourites once I've finished.


Name: Wolfie Jojo (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 6:18 · For: Chapter 2: Unexpected Guests
Grr! It's a page-turner! (Not that there are pages). I think I'll just give up on the work and read all of this now. Yay! Oh, you describe the characters so well. Is Sirius ok? Damn you Mundungus (oops, DH spoilers in my review). I really like induction-into-the-order fics, because you've got a start and an end to hold the structure, but the middle is completely up to you! (A bit like a sandwich really). Must...read...next...chapter...


Name: Wolfie Jojo (Signed) · Date: 12/09/07 6:05 · For: Chapter 1: Not Quite Picture Perfect
Ooh, intriguing! I really like the detail of the photos and Kingsley's office. Go Moody! In his so-far brief appearence, you've captured the man I love perfectly. I want to read more, but I have work to do, so I'll be back later.


Name: Trucker (Signed) · Date: 11/17/07 2:45 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Excellent! A well-crafted tale that brings my favorite Marauder back for a short time. Keep Writing!


Name: lovely_witch (Signed) · Date: 11/16/07 13:52 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
I loved your story! I like when fan fics seem like something that actually happened and were just left out of the books. I can't believe this was your first one. Awesome job.


Name: siriusblackhead (Signed) · Date: 11/14/07 20:09 · For: Chapter 1: Not Quite Picture Perfect
A fic about Kingsley. This is a first for me, and it's very well written. I always like hearing the point of view of slightly minor characters.


Name: Ghoul In Pajamas (Signed) · Date: 11/14/07 18:44 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
That was great! It's an original idea and I liked it a lot. Kingsley's reaction when he first saw Sirius was really funny, and everyone seemed to be in character.


Name: percyandpenny4eva (Signed) · Date: 11/14/07 10:57 · For: Chapter 1: Not Quite Picture Perfect
i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kl


Name: snpdrgn (Signed) · Date: 11/14/07 7:49 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Excellent story of a "missing" event from the books. I love your writing and hope you write another story. Thanks!


Name: MaraudingMarauders (Signed) · Date: 11/14/07 7:04 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Amazing fan fic! Loved reading it and though it was a interesting take on how Black and Shacklebolt would have met. Kinda humorous too! :)


Name: jess1z1 (Signed) · Date: 11/14/07 1:49 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Wonderful! It was great! Very good! Very in-character. I love Sirius and Kingsley and Moody and Tonks and Remus and you wrote them well.

Added to favourites.

You might like to check the story The Summer Of The Phoenix. If it's not here, it is in www.harrypotterfanfiction.com.


Name: x_lily_evans_x (Signed) · Date: 11/14/07 1:14 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
I like this story! It's an original little fic, and I liked how you made Kingsley blast Sirius off his feet when he first saw the latter. And I thought everyone was in-character too. I especially liked that Tonks helped Lupin with making dinner. Hee :D Thanks for writing this! (:


Name: mock_turtle (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 23:10 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
oh, completely creepy premonition in the last sentence...

I like this.


Name: KJ_bookworm (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 23:02 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
That was a great story. I had always wondered what happened when Sirius and Kingsley met.
Will you write any more fan fiction? I would love to read more.


Name: skippy agogo (Signed) · Date: 11/13/07 22:06 · For: Chapter 4: What Was Missing
Very well done. congrats, hope to see more fics from you.


Name: Scrivenshaft_Quill (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 15:03 · For: Chapter 3: Left in the Dark
Fantastic fanfic!
The characterization and dialogue is spot on and I can really tell you've thought this story through. You really believe .J.K.Rowling herself would have written the chapters this way because of its faithfulness to the story.
Keep up the good work!


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