Reviewer: Allovimo
Date: 10/31/10 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Handled beautifully!

Reviewer: Siriussirius
Date: 08/16/09 13:10
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Gosh, Love Sirius:D

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 09/08/08 20:03
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

An excellent idea for a story! Excessively well-written and fun, too. You did an excellent job of capturing Kingsley, picking out all the hints of a considerable minor character. Your story was so good it actually felt like part of the book, not like most fan fiction. Stupendous!

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 12/09/07 6:34
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Wow! I'm not entirely sure why, but I'm crying. Please don't think I'm soppy. This story is amazing, I really enjoyed it. You don't mind me printing a copy for my 'fan fic' folder, do you? Oh, and I love the last little bit, it finished the story neatly. Wow!

Author's Response: 'course, go ahead, glad you liked it:) yay, I made someone cry! (in a good way, I hope)

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 12/09/07 6:25
Chapter: Chapter 3: Left in the Dark

Phew, Sirius is okay. Ah bless, moody is so sweet. Well, I can think of better words, but... And Remus, trying so hard to keep the peace. I really love your story, I'll add it to favourites once I've finished.

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 12/09/07 6:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Unexpected Guests

Grr! It's a page-turner! (Not that there are pages). I think I'll just give up on the work and read all of this now. Yay! Oh, you describe the characters so well. Is Sirius ok? Damn you Mundungus (oops, DH spoilers in my review). I really like induction-into-the-order fics, because you've got a start and an end to hold the structure, but the middle is completely up to you! (A bit like a sandwich really). Must...read...next...chapter...

Reviewer: Wolfie Jojo
Date: 12/09/07 6:05
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not Quite Picture Perfect

Ooh, intriguing! I really like the detail of the photos and Kingsley's office. Go Moody! In his so-far brief appearence, you've captured the man I love perfectly. I want to read more, but I have work to do, so I'll be back later.

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 11/17/07 2:45
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Excellent! A well-crafted tale that brings my favorite Marauder back for a short time. Keep Writing!

Reviewer: lovely_witch
Date: 11/16/07 13:52
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

I loved your story! I like when fan fics seem like something that actually happened and were just left out of the books. I can't believe this was your first one. Awesome job.

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 11/14/07 20:09
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not Quite Picture Perfect

A fic about Kingsley. This is a first for me, and it's very well written. I always like hearing the point of view of slightly minor characters.

Reviewer: Ghoul In Pajamas
Date: 11/14/07 18:44
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

That was great! It's an original idea and I liked it a lot. Kingsley's reaction when he first saw Sirius was really funny, and everyone seemed to be in character.

Reviewer: percyandpenny4eva
Date: 11/14/07 10:57
Chapter: Chapter 1: Not Quite Picture Perfect

i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kl

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 11/14/07 7:49
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Excellent story of a "missing" event from the books. I love your writing and hope you write another story. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/14/07 7:04
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Amazing fan fic! Loved reading it and though it was a interesting take on how Black and Shacklebolt would have met. Kinda humorous too! :)

Reviewer: jess1z1
Date: 11/14/07 1:49
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Wonderful! It was great! Very good! Very in-character. I love Sirius and Kingsley and Moody and Tonks and Remus and you wrote them well.

Added to favourites.

You might like to check the story The Summer Of The Phoenix. If it's not here, it is in www.harrypotterfanfiction.com.

Reviewer: x_lily_evans_x
Date: 11/14/07 1:14
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

I like this story! It's an original little fic, and I liked how you made Kingsley blast Sirius off his feet when he first saw the latter. And I thought everyone was in-character too. I especially liked that Tonks helped Lupin with making dinner. Hee :D Thanks for writing this! (:

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 11/13/07 23:10
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

oh, completely creepy premonition in the last sentence...

I like this.

Reviewer: KJ_bookworm
Date: 11/13/07 23:02
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

That was a great story. I had always wondered what happened when Sirius and Kingsley met.
Will you write any more fan fiction? I would love to read more.

Reviewer: skippy agogo
Date: 11/13/07 22:06
Chapter: Chapter 4: What Was Missing

Very well done. congrats, hope to see more fics from you.

Reviewer: Scrivenshaft_Quill
Date: 11/12/07 15:03
Chapter: Chapter 3: Left in the Dark

Fantastic fanfic!
The characterization and dialogue is spot on and I can really tell you've thought this story through. You really believe .J.K.Rowling herself would have written the chapters this way because of its faithfulness to the story.
Keep up the good work!

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