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Name: tickled_pink (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 1:19 · For: Chapter 1
Aww, this was sweet! I like the way you played up both the new relationships without making it too mushy, it was very realistic. And yay, Andromedea wasn't alone for Christmas! - everyone seems to forget that she lost her husband, daughter AND son-in-law. Nicely done!

Tickled Pink

Author's Response: Thank you!! :-) I was very tempted to put wayyy too much H/G in there since i'm obsessed w/ that, but then i realized that it was a george fic sooo..... And i agree that andromeda was the real victim of the war!! *sniff* poor andromeda!!


Name: humyn (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 23:46 · For: Chapter 1
oh, sorry i forgot. my absolute favorite part is the ending two paragraphs! it fits with thier characters so well!


Name: humyn (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 23:45 · For: Chapter 1
ah. so sweet! i love how george helps out ron. i loved the family's reactions too! a little bit of honest critisim- it would be great if you could put more back ground in the story- put more "senery" in it if that makes any sence.

Author's Response: Thank you!! Thanks for the constructive criticism too-i like hearing stuff like that, so i know how to make my fics better!


Name: helz_belz (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 22:18 · For: Chapter 1
Nice job, i especially love the end, with the shooting star. Fred was one of the saddest deaths for me in the book so this fic is special.


Name: helz_belz (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 22:17 · For: Chapter 1
Nice job, i especially love the end, with the shooting star. Fred was one of the saddest deaths for me in the book so this fic is special.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I miss Fred too. :-(


Name: starkllr (Signed) · Date: 11/03/07 21:37 · For: Chapter 1
Very nice!

I think setting it several months after Fred's death explains the relative lack of angst just fine. The only thing I'd question is everyone's surprise at George offering the job to Ron - with the situation you set up, I'd have guessed that the rest of the Weasleys would be wondering what took George to long to get around to asking.

Great job with the characterization. I really enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I think that the Weasleys might have been a little shocked, because they didn't think that George would have been able to cope in the shop without Fred and they themselves weren't ready to move on yet. so yeah.


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