wow i must say i absolustly love it and i cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work
great, keep it up!
its ok but hermione needs to be sexyer
its a very good story but weres the part were they r in the 17th centry.and in the story u mist spelledfirst years somewere in the ending.
but please finish it so i can read it
this story is da bomb
Great first chapter! i like it so far, keep up the good work!
Great idea for a story! I can't wait to read the rest of it
Ohhh...I like it! Keep up the good work and update soon.
that was too short!! update ..i love it!
The premise sounds really interesting. I like how you didn't have Hermione blow up completely, I think that is so oc.