Reviewer: jenny b
Date: 11/01/07 17:32
Chapter: ....

This was a really descriptive fic. Sirius' emotions were captured perfectly, and I really liked how you detailed his thoughts on the war.

"To survive a dozen years surrounded by Dementors with his sanity intact to lose his mind after a few weeks in his childhood home would make for a poor story, indeed. "

This bit made me laugh, which was good, because I was almost crying before!

The only problem I noticed is that you repeated some parts a bit, so you were saying pretty much the same thing, just with different wording.

It was a great story overall!!



Author's Response: Thank you, jenny b, for the review. I'm so very glad to hear that you liked Sirius's portrayal, as I think I'd have to cut off my own head if I butchered his character. *Loves Sirius so much it's bordering unhealthy*

Ah, that line. Yeah, there had to be a few lighter/sarcastic moments in there; this is Sirius, after all, and just 100% brooding angst isn't right. And the repeating thing was intentional, as I don't think there was a lot of variety for Sirius during OotP. Thoughts and such tend to be a bit circular and repetitive in those situations, I think.

But thanks once again for reading, and leaving such a nice review; I really appreciate it.

~Megan

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 11/01/07 16:33
Chapter: ....

*sniff* good story!

Author's Response: Thanks, JustLikeHermione77.

~Megan

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