I loved it. It was very James in my opinion anyway. *sigh* I do love Lily/James. I love the poem, I loved how it managed to be consistent and still very sweet. I think this is one of the best poems I've read-period. Well done! Keep up the great work like always! - Nikki.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I like my other poems better, but if you say it's good then there must be some truth in that =P Thanks for the lovely review!

It was a sweet poem but I feel that yiour words( though very nice )were misused. If this is your first attempt at poetry then well done.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks, and I agree my wording is still very stiff at times. I'm working on it though!

Very, very cute =)

Author's Response: Thanks! (=