Reviews For O Holy Night
Reviewer: Hermione_Resilda
Date: 05/01/05 12:17
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

Aww, everyone seems sad to see Harry go, as was I. Can't wait for the epuloge though! I read it's going to explain stuff. (and I know that's now how you spell "epuloge".... Great discriptions from the chapter.

Reviewer: XoDramaCutieXo
Date: 04/30/05 9:02
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

Oh no! Harry died??? :.:cries:.: I loved the story up until Harry died. Now I'm sad, could he come back, please????

Author's Response: a the epilogue. You'll see what I mean.

Reviewer: a muggle named Caity
Date: 04/29/05 13:45
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

Also, you will have an epilouge right?? And it will be happier right?? Because your story is the only story I like that of which Harry actually dies, so please make the epilouge happy!!

Author's Response: yes the epilogue will be happier. It will sort of provide..closure.

Reviewer: a muggle named Caity
Date: 04/29/05 13:41
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

Hey Sarah, It's Caitlin!! I finally figured out how to review on here!! Anyway, Thanks for the link to chapter 5 before, but now that it's on here, I read it again and I still think that it is really good!! But was that the of your story?? Anyway, I give your story a perfect ten!! And remember, you will read mine when it comes up right??

Author's Response: Of course I will read yours.

Reviewer: lovestruck90
Date: 04/28/05 19:31
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

I almost cried but my nephews are here and i was interupted. It was incredible though, i never invisioned harry dying and his 4 day old daughter killing Voldedork nice!

Author's Response: yes. Well I'm glad I finished this story. I put a lot into it..

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/28/05 19:21
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

i did cry but it was cool how the whole "your the GIRL who lived now" thing has happend, and Julie kinda is like Harry now or how he was. plzzzz write an epilouge

Reviewer: Inspireroflove9191
Date: 04/28/05 18:18
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

This is truly a masterpiece. I really cried at the end. It's so beautiful and sad, how could Harry die? Sob,Sob. Beautiful but sad.

Author's Response: why thank you. I'm honored.

Reviewer: VeelaWishMaker
Date: 04/28/05 14:44
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

Im crying here! I never cry, sensing as how morbid I am. But now, ooooh, I cry! I havn't cried since I was four! *sob* No mre sad stuff, pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaase!

Author's Response: hmm.dunno if I can promise you no more sad stuff.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/27/05 18:34
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

im crying hysterically here! this is so sad! why why w whywhy why why why? this story is so sad!

Author's Response: well. the epilogue will be happier..somewhat

Reviewer: Orkid
Date: 04/27/05 17:48
Chapter: Lone Lay the World

You made me cry!! Such a good story. PLEASE make and epilogue! I'd love to hear what happens to Hermione and Julie. So sad Harry died, kinda weird Snape didn't care bout that though...

Author's Response: I rather enjoyed Snape's comments. it was very him. I"m workin on the epilogue.

Reviewer: eightyseven
Date: 04/27/05 0:21
Chapter: November Pain

Fabulous story! Very engaging! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: kernkraft_21
Date: 04/26/05 21:16
Chapter: November Pain

this story is great and i cant wait till the next update, so plz do it soon. i really like how hermione and harry have come together in their relationship and also how harry is protective of her and the baby. its exactly how i pictured him if he had a baby in the real books... deserves more then 10 i think but i can only give you 10. this Story = 20 out of 10

Reviewer: Orkid
Date: 04/26/05 17:49
Chapter: November Pain

Oh my gosh! AWESOME story! I can't wait to read Ch. 5!!!!! Please post soon! Again, great job!! =D

Reviewer: pien
Date: 04/26/05 9:33
Chapter: November Pain

I can't wait to see the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/25/05 20:12
Chapter: November Pain

one more thing: PLZ OH PLZ SUBMIT THE NEXT CHAPTER!! not yelling just VERY excited and i LOVEEE this story! Rating: 1 million!

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/24/05 15:42
Chapter: The Prophecy Revamped

oooooo! i love this story so far! Harry is so adorable how protective he is! everyone seems EXTREMELY like themselves and thats what i like. They are also the CUTEST couple in this story.

Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 04/24/05 11:22
Chapter: November Pain

Omigoodness! this is the BEST Hary?Hermione story yet! i can't WAIT till you write more, but plz plz plz, don't kill Harry off! This is my favorite story and plz keep writing! You rock!

Reviewer: lycanthropy
Date: 04/20/05 8:43
Chapter: Truth be Told

Firstly, your attention to detail is outstanding. If I'm not mistaken, you'd give Snape a run for his money ;-} I like how you've portrayed Hermione and Harry's apparent concern for her, however - why would Hermione have to take a paternity test? It implies that she not only has had “relations” with someone other than Harry, but also at around the same time. I’m a bit confused… Perhaps the later chapters will explain this? Other than that, your writing skill is excellent and I look forward to reading the next!

Author's Response: the evil imfamous paternity test question....*shudders* thanks for the compliments tho.

Reviewer: VeelaWishMaker
Date: 03/28/05 14:11
Chapter: Truth be Told


Author's Response: hey. I'm working on it. won't be up this weekend as it won't be done but I got a good chunk of writing done today.

Reviewer: VeelaWishMaker
Date: 03/26/05 11:17
Chapter: Truth be Told

Please post up the next chapter soon! I'm DIEING because you make me wait. How would you live with yourself if you knew you had murdered me by not posting. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!(I am fully committed to this story. I will not die until I read it all.) *huggles desktop icon that links to this story*

Author's Response: I have a few things I need to get done first but I'll try and write today. I'm up to 10 pages now. I'm aiming to have it done and up by next weekend.

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