May I use your story O Holy Night to make a soundtrack for, for an assignment on the Forums. If you dont know what I;m talkin about, then go to the forums, go to the Great Hall, than click on Sticky: Quarterly Assignment- Fanfiction Soundtracks. Thanks!
May I use your story O Holy Night to make a soundtrack for, for an assignment on the Forums. If you dont know what I;m talkin about, then go to the forums, go to the Great Hall, than click on Sticky: Quarterly Assignment- Fanfiction Soundtracks. Thanks!
That was really good! It was so sad and sweet! I loved it!
All in all I thought it was a pretty good story. I would like to offer a tip. During tiems of dialogue I would suggest that you stay away from descriptive words of the characters that way it flow a little better. For example, instead of typing: Harry said " Oh really?" "Really." replied the bushy haired teenager... replace bushy haired teenager with just "Hermione." And when you have two characters going back and forth you do not need to put who said what. I can be determined who is speaking from order at the beginning of the conversation. Just a recommendation. I enjoyed the story, helped pass the hours at work :o)
i almost could have cried through the last two chapters i loved it so much i give you 10 out of 10 even though i would rather have given you a 1,000,000
I love it!! I started crying when Harry came back, and then even harder when he had to leave! I'm so glad you displayed Prof. Snape as actually a really nice person! 100, ok, so I can't go up that high! I guess you'll just have to settle for a 10, lol! Awesome story! Leigh
Hey Sarah, remember me? It's Caity!! I loved your epilouge!! At first I thought that you were going to make it a SS/HG romance and it started to freak me out!! But, then I saw that you weren't and I was at ease, lol!! Anyway, this last chapter was really sad, it made me cry!! I was surprised at the end how Harry came back and all, but it was good to hear from him again. Also, I'm glad that Hermione is at peace now. This was a really great story Sarah, and you should be VERY proud of yourself!! I give your whole story a perfect 10!!! Keep up the good work and write some more!! Caity
I'm glad you made it to the end! That chapter was so sad, i cried! Love little Julie and I wasn't expecting Harry to show up! That was cool
OMG I absouletly loved it. Bloody brillant. It had me crying literally. I just fell in love with Julie.
Aww, I can't believe it's over.. *sigh I love Julie's character, and when she says "gots". Great job with the story. Please write others.
OH MY GOD!t's finished! i feel like i'm gonna cry! i loved it when harry came back, and making snape all friendly was cool. now i'm just going to go cry into my pillow, bye
OMG!this is the BEST story i have ever read. u know why i like this story, its because it REALLY REALLY seems well, real! it is really sad and making me cry but this story is really good. excellent job, and i can't wait to read ur next stories ( i hoope ur writing some ner H/Hr) 10/10 --IluvDanRad4ever--
great story!!! i'm really glad you finished it!!! it's among, if not THE best i've read on this site. the ending is a bit sad but the turn of events made it more interesting. 10+++
I thought it was really cool. I nearly cried. It was put together really well! I loved the way you put everything together, so the readers weren't confused. A very very good job!
That was sad! I almost started crying when Harry died! ::sobs:: But then my family would wonder why I as crying abd they just don't get Harry Potter! That was awesome though!!!
The story itself was great but you used the same adjectives too much. example: chestnut-haired teen, emerald-eyed boy, etc.
Exceedingly well done and well worth the wait. Thank you for your efforts.
Sarah, when are you gonna submit the epilouge???
Okay, Harry is not supposed to die!!! *crying*. that was sweet, and sad, and .... I loved it!
Aww, everyone seems sad to see Harry go, as was I. Can't wait for the epuloge though! I read it's going to explain stuff. (and I know that's now how you spell "epuloge".... Great discriptions from the chapter.
