that was pretty good, but you rushed too much. take your time so you can add more details. but i still think the plot is good.
a good story, well conceived and well written! thanks!
Okay this story just keeps getting even more ridiculous. Why do you keep making everybody only pronounce only half of Hermione's name that does not sound cool as a nickname!!
Okay sorry I don't get this! Harry and Hermione are still acting like friends, not like they slept with each other. It doesn't make any sense.
Hey cool!! The title of this chapter is the same as the title for the first Alias episode!
I Love this story! It's so sad how Harry can only show up as a one time thing when Julie is so young, becuase other than The Picture, she probably won't remember he father at all. Great, no, Fantastic job on this story!
OHMIGOD!!! I love this chapter! It's sooo+ sad!!! But that's why I love it!
aww...that was a sweet story. It seemed pretty believable too. Kudos for that! Keep writing. It's a very nice job.
I'm just confused why Hermione felt the need to take a paternity test. Has she slept with someone other than Harry? If she's only slept with Harry, what is she afraid of? Ghosts sleeping with her in the night?
Holy Cow! This story is amazing! Gawd you should see the tears that are streaming down my face. That was beautiful. And it is so perfect the way Harry comes back!
I luved it i wish Harry didn't die.
I liked it but i wish Harry didn't have to die. but ya can't make all stories perfect.
i loved it. 1 question how many different colors did you use to describe hermiones eyes and hair.i loved the whole drifting to a ss/hg.
omg, good story, luv it
I loved this story, excellent job and i agree it sucks that harry died but it really made the story cool at the end
That was really good but i wish Harry wouldn't have died.
I love your story, it was really good. I got teary eyed when Harry came back, and more so when he had to leave. I really wish you haddn't killed Harry though it was good for the story. And your constructive critisizme comment is that you shouldn't use so many descriptive words to portray the characters, just use their names. But besides that awesome story!
I have no idea why you get no reviews. I loved the story. Every time I stopped crying long enough to read another paragraph, I would start again. You really touched my heart with this story. Keep writing.
Very Cute!!!!! that was really good and i honestly don't understand why this story does not have more praise. although some parts did not flow as much as others. the story worked really well. Great Job!
Great story! I agree with Aitrus about the descriptions in the dialogs, but still great. The ending was sooo sad, i almost cried! I loved Julie and i also love how Snape was nice in the end. Keep writing!