I really loved the story, but, I would have liked some background on Harry and Hermione getting together, I would have liked to see how you developed their relationship. Please keep it up though :)
Interesting, but what I'm wondering is, if it isn't Harry's child hermione is carrying, then whose is it?
Isn't it kind of out of character for Hermoine to need to check the paternity of her child with a potion, the insinuation is thatshe has been having sex with multiple partners, often enough that she doesn't know which one is the father.
Good story but problem bothered me throughout.
Very well done, I loved how you turn from Harry/HG to SS/HG. Very good twist,
Mushy, but cool.
omg u killed harry????
I loved the way that Harry tied up loose ends...I liked Julie's reaction to Snape
i liked it but why did you have to kill harry
Very Nice, I really enjoyed it ,keep up the good work...
if I did not have to try to not cry by being a git of a male that would have been a great tear jerker ending but for me it was just a great ending
very very good made me cry :)
best one man good job!
better than the second one
my favorite so far
this is pretty good to but i have to say the first one is better
pretty good keep writing
Your last chapter is really touch my heart, I mean the part in the graveyard.
you have one of the best harry potter and hermione granger love stories I've ever read
oh wow. oh wow. that's pretty much all i can say after reading this story. it is sooo good!!! i love all the emotion in it!! kudos!! you did a wonderful job!!!