Reviewer: Selsdon
Date: 03/13/05 20:43
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

YEA!!!!!!!!!! post again! puleeesssseeeee!

Author's Response: I am doing my best. LOL

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 03/13/05 19:38
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

I loved this chapter, especially their first kiss! I can't wait until you post again. I really like your ideas and you remain very true to the characters.

Author's Response: Thanks. It's good to see that you continue to read, even with my midnight mistakes...LOL The first kiss is always the sweetest.

Reviewer: LittleTom45
Date: 03/13/05 19:34
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

I just read the first six chapters and think they are great. You show real talent. I find the idea of the castle neat. It could very easliy start a whole new series.

Author's Response: Yes, I thought of that. I would like it if you would take a look at my other fic here which is "Life Goes On". It takes place after they all leave Hogwarts. Youmight like it if you like the idea of the castle here. thanks for reading and reviewing. It's always good to hear what you all think.

Reviewer: patronumpal
Date: 03/13/05 19:33
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

I THINK YOUR STORY IS SO CUTE! I really like it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the support. Hope to see you again and often...LOL

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 03/13/05 19:29
Chapter: Destination Unknown

I loved Ron's comment about Hermione's trunk! I also thought it was interesting that all four had different addresses (or so they thought) and then ended up in the same place, just different rooms. Again, my only problems with this story are the typos, otherwise I think it's great.

Author's Response: Typos are the enemy it seems...and did you notice if you put the address together it would spell out where they were going? Not one person has mentioned or noticed. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 03/13/05 19:19
Chapter: Hogsmeade Holiday

I was surprised that Harry would suggest going to Madame Puddifoot's given his cringeworthy experience there with Cho, but I guess his sense of romance won out. Good chapter!

Author's Response: I thought about that as well. However I thought that it would make for a funny scene especially with Ron and Hermione. LOL And who doesn't like a little romance?

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 03/13/05 19:08
Chapter: Fairytale in the Making

I love that you've made Harry realize that part of the reason Ginny is so appealing is that she isn't afraid to speak her mind. Again, the only negative thing I have to say it to be careful of your use of words like you're vs. your. It takes away from an other wise great story.

Author's Response: Thanks for noticing and commenting. It is a grat tool for myself. And again soory about the misuse of you're and your. I find it very ironic, seeing that I constantly ream my family for the same mistakes...LOL

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 03/13/05 19:00
Chapter: Stolen Glances

Really good chapter. Your dialogue between characters is very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate all the support. I try very hard to make it sound like something you would really hear coming from a couple of teenagers.

Reviewer: Czarina
Date: 03/13/05 18:53
Chapter: Heat and Heartbeats

I just found your story and it definitely has my interest. I think you've captured the awkwardness between Harry and Ginny really well. The only negative thing I have to say is to watch out for spelling errors that my get by spellcheck (i.e. their vs. they're). A very minor thing, but it's my pet peeve.

Author's Response: It is a pet peeve of mine as well. However I do sometimes miss them when I'm typing at 2am...LOL And spell check doesn't always catch those kinds of errors. Glad you found your way here and hope to see more of you. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Fleury
Date: 03/13/05 17:59
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

*squee* Harry and Ginny have a lovely first kiss :D:D:D:DDDD Soooo cute :D Lovely story. Keep writing

Author's Response: Thank you ...I love it...another reader. Glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: A True Weasley
Date: 03/13/05 5:23
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

WOW what i great story!awwwww harrys and ginnys first kiss!!plez update soon

Author's Response: I love to hear that you like it. Yes, it was about time for that kiss. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: LaraAnn
Date: 03/13/05 0:51
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

aww, first kiss glee!!! keep updating, you paint a good picture!!

Author's Response: Oh thank you. I want to be able to write so that the reader can actually picture what is happening. Hope to see you around again.

Reviewer: harryandginny4evr
Date: 03/12/05 22:19
Chapter: Stolen Glances

awesomeness! keep writing! (go harry but admit it already u love her!)**10**

Author's Response: LOL thanks for the review and coming back for more.

Reviewer: harryandginny4evr
Date: 03/12/05 22:14
Chapter: Heat and Heartbeats

back again. I love it and i am almost done with the first chapter of my fic so i hope you read it! **10**

Author's Response: Thank you and be sure to remind me as I do not normally go looking for fics to read...only because I find it interferes with my writing. But I would be happy to read for you.

Reviewer: el Mago
Date: 03/12/05 3:36
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

Good work keep it up! I know everyone is saying this but I can't wait for the sequel to Life Goes On. It is my favourite fic of all time so i can't wait till it continues!

Author's Response: Thank you...I love the encouragement. I hope to have this fic finished soon so I can begin posting the sequel.

Reviewer: hpfanforlife
Date: 03/09/05 20:12
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

Aww.. Ginny and Harry kissed! I loved the chapter! It was a unique idea to put them in the Gryffindor castle too, I never would have dreamed that up in a million years. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. I try very hard to make each story unique althought it is getting hard with all the great fics floating around. Thanks for the support.

Reviewer: Hermione2723
Date: 03/08/05 13:36
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

I reviewed on HPFF by the name of Dobby101 and this is a great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for all the support. I really do appreciate it. Glad you like it and I look forward to seeing you again.

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 03/08/05 12:22
Chapter: Gryffindor Castle

Ya gota love Ginny, ditch the familly and find a place to be alone. The girl knows what she wants

Author's Response: She does that...and she knew poor Harry was terrified of what her brothers would do. They also needed to be alone considering they hadn't been since the visit to Hogsmeade. He never really had the chance to sneak in a first kiss.

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 03/08/05 11:41
Chapter: Hogsmeade Holiday

"Consider yourself a pansy, because that's where you are eating." Classic Keep up the good work

Author's Response: I, personally, loved that line as well. Just goes to show you that given the right woman, men will follow. LOL And I also think that Ron will always feel that way about Hermione.

Reviewer: Huskers
Date: 03/08/05 11:25
Chapter: Fairytale in the Making

I just have to love Ginny, she is the most well known of the characters, yet we know almost nothing about her. Lets you take her anyway you want. I think without a doubt, she is the one who will make Harry toe the line.

Author's Response: Ginny is a great character. I definately see her being the take charge kind of person. Thanks for reading and I hope to see more of you.

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