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Name: Txcowgirljp (Signed) · Date: 12/23/07 8:00 · For: Never Be Mine
wow. i had the same situation where i liked my best guy friend/ brother figure. and it looks like nothing will ever change but that is okay.

i really like it. it is very sweet and very sincere. i like the brother/sister stanza and the holding you until the world ends. But i really like the fact that you put the word "just" in the last line. "But she'll never just be mine" so true so true

Author's Response: I like the art about them being brother-sister type friends too--it really seems like that's what Lily thought of them in the book, doesn't it?


Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 11/09/07 8:44 · For: Never Be Mine
I want to hold her forever,
Or just until this world ends.

Just one word:Awwwwwwwwwwww=Sammy


Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I think this poem is a lot sweeter than my other poem--you know, a lot more to "Awwwwwwwwwwww" about. : )


Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 18:37 · For: Never Be Mine
*sniff* good poem! poor snape!!

Author's Response: i feel bad for Snape too! but he had quite a few chances to say he loved Lily, and i think this poem was a good way to say "he had a chance, he lost it, be sad and get on with life". sort of. thanks! : )


Name: amzing (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 17:50 · For: Never Be Mine
wow...thats really good... i wish the ending could be happier but ya know its true. really good writing anyway..i feel bad 4 you sweetie...i wish u could have gotten ur crush...o well maybe one day he'll wake up and he'll realize just how special you are and you'll be waking up with the person who already knew that...heehee...i just had to use that quote on somebody.. kinda random...anyway nice poem:)..good job


Name: amzing (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 17:50 · For: Never Be Mine
wow...thats really good... i wish the ending could be happier but ya know its true. really good writing anyway..i feel bad 4 you sweetie...i wish u could have gotten ur crush...o well maybe one day he'll wake up and he'll realize just how special you are and you'll be waking up with the person who already knew that...heehee...i just had to use that quote on somebody.. kinda random...anyway nice poem:)..good job

Author's Response: thanks so much for being the first reviewer! y crush was actually kind of a jerk, but you love somebody, you hate somebody, then you move on, right? : )


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