Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/19/08 17:30
Chapter: One-Shot

This was a really powerful piece. I've heard many deffinitions of love, but yours seems to surpass them all. I'm a little confused as to why this is from Ginny's POV as she ends up with Harry, is it how she feels when they break up after Dumbledore's funeral or when she sees Harry's supposed dead body? At first i thought it was Hermione's POVV, then Tonks sprang to mind, you are right, it could fit with alot of characters, either way it's brilliant.

Author's Response: Heh, thank you very much [: If you're reading it from Ginny's, then it can really be either - although it annoys even me in the fact that she'd only react like that for about a second in either situation, although this would be more likely after Harry 'dies.' xD Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 01/14/08 5:50
Chapter: One-Shot

Hey its really good. And I imagine the girl to be Hermione, because she blushes when describing what Amortentia smells like to her, to Slughorn. !

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 11/17/07 11:45
Chapter: One-Shot

Amanda.. this was to say the least, amazing. You did a brilliant job describing Ginny's pain. My favorite line was 'Love is the bringer of pain.' It just is so beautiful. Keep up the awesome stories, hon (and the beautiful banners, at that!) xxvictoria

Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot [:

Reviewer: deej
Date: 11/11/07 13:47
Chapter: One-Shot

I like this fic, Amanda. You really brought out the emotion of it. Just so you know, Change the genders around, and it could be from most guys point of view, also. Well done.

Author's Response: Good point, thanks [:

Reviewer: quoddy
Date: 11/08/07 1:21
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow, that was nice. :]
The ending bit reminded me a lot of a stage I went through where I was scheming against love.
It sounds weird, and metaphoric, but I was literally trying to figure out how to make love go away forever and let people realise how bad it is.

Hmm. : But it was great, anywho!
I'm finding a lot of sad Ginny fics lately...Poor her. ;__;

Author's Response: Heh, yeah, love can really suck sometimes! But it's always good, in the end. Usually... Anyway, thanks!

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 11/07/07 22:52
Chapter: One-Shot

This was absolutely beautiful. I think you have a wonderful way with lending the qualities of the female to a few different characters.
I loved the honest emotions in it. I don't think it would work for Lily though, but any of the others, yes.
All in all, well done. ~Wendy

Author's Response: Thank you [: The emotions were the hardest part to write for me, because they brought up a lot of old feelings I didn't want to have to re-experience! I personally see it as Ginny, but I've been told many, many different opinions on it, so...

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 11/01/07 16:38
Chapter: One-Shot

Congrats on your first fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was great and the emotion wa so real!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!!!!!:)


Author's Response: Thanks! I try, [;

Reviewer: gryffindorboi
Date: 10/31/07 12:42
Chapter: One-Shot

Great little 1 shot. I enjoyed it's depth and complexity and yet it's simplicity. Does that make sense? Simple yet complex I guess is what I mean. Beautiful.

Author's Response: Don't worry, I get it [: Thanks!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 10/29/07 16:59
Chapter: One-Shot

Lovely.

Author's Response: [: I try!

Reviewer: Crows
Date: 10/29/07 16:37
Chapter: One-Shot

This is such a beautiful tribute to our favorite female characters. It's beautifully written and it's going straight to my faves!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: clr30
Date: 10/28/07 22:28
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow very pretty. I actually thought at first it was Dumbledore speaking about Grindelwald. Very beautiful all the same:)

Author's Response: Ha, yeah, I can see that! Thanks!

Reviewer: Lily_n_James
Date: 10/28/07 20:49
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow. *wipes tears* You do not know, my friend, how close you've hit home. You have no idea.

~Wendy

Author's Response: Aw, thanks [: This comes from the heart, it's nice to know it touches other people's too!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/28/07 19:35
Chapter: One-Shot

As I was reading this, I kept trying to think of who it was from the POV of. It really made me think of Ginny, because it sounded like Harry she was talking about and the senarios made sense. I guess it COULD be from someone else's, but that's what made the most sense to me.

It wasn't the most fantastic thing I've ever read (it was a tad bland and a little... cliche?), but I did enjoy reading it. Kudos to you, and I hope your fanfiction career takes you to marvelous places!

*clink of butterbeer bottles*

-Stubby

Author's Response: Yes, it is Ginny who I think of first when I read this, although like I said it works for others. Thanks for your honesty, I do agree! -toasts-

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 10/28/07 18:58
Chapter: One-Shot

It's pretty good, for a monolouge. i imagined it as Tonks speaking, but that could just be favorism seeping into my point of view...

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I did it like that on purpose... everybody likes to have their own favorite characters tell stories!

Reviewer: insomnia95
Date: 10/28/07 18:29
Chapter: One-Shot

i honestly thought that was very beautiful. it showed the real emotions on how much they loved that person.

Author's Response: Thank you [: This was drawn (somewhat) from a real experience, so I tried to make it as areal as possible.

Reviewer: insomnia95
Date: 10/28/07 18:27
Chapter: One-Shot

i honestly thought that was very beautiful. it showed the real emotions on how much they loved that person.

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