Reviews For His Greatest Power
Reviewer: mirimos
Date: 11/02/07 23:03
Chapter: Chapter 1- Discovering Love

Not bad. Now add some more chapters you have my attention ;)

Author's Response: Not bad? I'll take it. all in all I'm planning about 6-8 chapters.

Reviewer: harry_victoria
Date: 11/02/07 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 1- Discovering Love

Dan, this is an excellent piece of work for a first-timer. You made Harry very compassionate to Aunt Petunia, showing a different side of him, and of Aunt Petunia that we've never seen between them. They've never really interacted, but you did a good impression of what might've happened if they did. Keep on writing, we may just be seeing a shining star here one day! xxvictoria

Author's Response: Thank you for those nice words, Victoria. Whilr the rest of the story is prtty much planned out, the interaction between Harry and Petunia was a sudden inspiration. Once it started it just flowed.

Author's Response: Thank you for those nice words, Victoria. Whilr the rest of the story is prtty much planned out, the interaction between Harry and Petunia was a sudden inspiration. Once it started it just flowed.

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