Reviews For His Greatest Power
Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 04/07/08 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

Thanks for the credit! It's your writing, I only jumped in the wagon.

Author's Response: The credit is well deserved. You did what a good beta should. You saw errors and suggested changes. You also had suggestions on how to improve my writing. In my opinion, you rock!

Reviewer: GryffindorGal87
Date: 04/07/08 11:28
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Harry's Birthday

Loved the chapter! The ending was to cute! =]

Author's Response: Thanks, This chapter was difficult to write. It was not one I had planned to write, but a reader from another site asked for it. I was not sure how it would flow.

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/05/08 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 3 - A Lunch Visitor

He always knew there were those that cared, like the Weasleys and Hermione, but he was getting better at letting them. - Could you explain? I don't get it.

Well, now it differently is turning AU. That's just my thought's though. The writing's good, it's just the content has slightly (or maybe a little more) disregarded Books 6 and 8.

Keep up the good work. You haven't written a bad story, just a different one to most.

~ Parchment and Quill

Author's Response: Thanks for reading P & Q. I meant it to be a little AU. It is how I wanted to see the summer go for him. Later on, I try to draw it back to Canon. I hope you keep reading.

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/05/08 16:44
Chapter: Chapter 2- Deciding to Love

Love!?!... How was that going to help him? Was he supposed to hug Voldemort to death? Was he supposed to invite him on a camping trip so they could sit around a campfire singing “Cum-Bye-Ah” until Voldemort passed out with the emotion of it? Somehow, Harry did not see that happening.

The above line is from the last chapter. It was the best line in my opinion. *LOL*

Ok, the best line/s in this chapter would be....'

If you don’t, expect to be hexed the next time I see you. And if you don’t think I won’t just ask any of my brothers. You taught me too many spells this last year, and I am not afraid to use them on you. Got it?

This is from Ginny's letter, which was fantastic. *LOL*

Keep up the good work. It's a little AU, mostly because of Petunia, but that's ok.

~ Parchment and Quill :)

Reviewer: Parchment and Quill
Date: 04/05/08 16:28
Chapter: Chapter 1- Discovering Love

Hmm, this is an interesting chapter. A little AU and Petunia is a little too knowledgeable and kind. But, hey, don't listen to me. If you want to make it less canon then fine, you do that.

Keep up the good work though. Your writing is really good. It's the content that is a little off canon, but that's OK if you want it that way.

~ Parchment and Quill

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/03/08 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

this is yet another review from me
but the last five lines with harry and ginny and the weasleys and hermione watching is just so sweet and cute

Author's Response: I wanted this chapter to be sweet. Too many times, I read in fics where they are all over each other right away. I wanted this to take it a little more slowly.

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/02/08 13:18
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

this is such a cool chapter, i absolutley love it with the weasleys and hermione watching that is just so cool ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/01/08 21:39
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Going to the Burrow.

you got fred and george perfelctly,you mastered the unmasterable. AKA the way they talk, you know,like volleying their speech and then topping it off by finishing together

Author's Response: Fred and George are up there amogst favorite characters of mine. I always liked their banter.

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/01/08 21:11
Chapter: Chapter 2- Deciding to Love

i absolutely love ginny's letter it's exactly
what i would expect her to say.
hehehehehe, i love the dream by the way is he ever going to kiss her i wonder (in the dream) i guess i'll read and find out

Reviewer: marauderteddylupin
Date: 04/01/08 20:59
Chapter: Chapter 1- Discovering Love

how sweet i really like this fic,i am new to this, and i am having giagantic trouble coming up with encouraging words..yes i am a girl

Reviewer: GryffindorGal87
Date: 03/26/08 11:03
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

awww! I loved this chapter! The ending was so sweet. =]

Author's Response: This chapter was fun to write.

Reviewer: teenyjewel
Date: 03/25/08 20:18
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

Aww, that was so cute! I am glad you updated, also glad Mugglenet is back up and running! Great job, and thanks!

Author's Response: I think this was my best written chapter. I am working with a new Beta, Ginny Guerra, and she taught me a lot about my own writing in this one chapter.

Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 03/25/08 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

I absolutely LOVE this chapter. I can't wait until you post your next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Next Chapter on the way

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 03/25/08 19:40
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

Oh this was sweet. I'm looking forward to reading the future chapters. I really can't wait to see how Petunia reacts to the Burrow. Will Molly have to put a Full Body Bind on Fred and George?

Author's Response: You will see that in the next chapter. As for the full body bind, I'm not sure.

Reviewer: Garnok
Date: 03/25/08 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Socks and Blankets

So glad this story has finally made it through the queue. I think it is a fantastic story. Keep writing and we will keep reading.

Author's Response: I will keep it up till it is done. I think 11-12 chapters total. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 03/25/08 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 1- Discovering Love

Good story - little hint, though, in your summary you've spelt prophecy with an s, instead of a c.


Author's Response: Thanks for catching that. I have gone in and fixed it.rnrnDeej

Reviewer: Victoriae Lupin
Date: 02/21/08 23:37
Chapter: Chapter 6 Lovely Ladies

"i'm just playing in her back yard"

Author's Response: almost makes me sound like a stalker.

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl163
Date: 02/17/08 10:42
Chapter: Chapter 8 - The Love Of Family

i love your story it is so good keep up the good work and update soon i loved the part with fred and george it was really funny great job

GryffindorGirl163 ♥

Author's Response: Thanks Gryffindorgirl163, I will be sumbitting the next chapter as soon as they open the queue again. Keep looking for it. Deej

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/10/08 14:43
Chapter: Chapter 8 - The Love Of Family

Nice one! Update soon, please!

Just a note: the newspaper name is "Daily Prophet" not Prophit.

Author's Response: Hiya Ginny, Thanks for catching that. I will go in a correct it. I will beg forgiveness as I finished it at 3:00 am. My beta didn't catch it either.

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 02/10/08 13:07
Chapter: Chapter 8 - The Love Of Family

not a bad day at all, really. pretty good, actually, seeing that you twisted the whole story quite a lot - but it still made sense, and there aren't any loose ends :D cool! are you on the beta board? you should sign up for it - you'll make a good one. trust me, i'm a good Seer :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Moonstonesilver. I only twisted it a teensy, tiny, itty, bitty bit. ;-) No, I am not on the Beta boards. I have thought about applying, but don't know if I want to make that commitment yet. Thanks again, deej

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