Why can't you finish this story??? I really like it!!!

[pokes] I want to know the rest! No fair to leave us hanging like that!

Author's Response: Next chapter is almost ready!

Well, you’ve got my attention! =D

It was a really good start. Your narrator seems very interesting, and Sirius was intriguingly mysterious. I can’t wait to see where you’re going with the plot.

One thing - in this paragraph:

‘You see, I’m a murder,’ he said, smiling slightly at the look I was giving him, as he got to his feet and dusted off his robes.

‘A murderer?’ I said, amazed. He looked nothing like a murder. Murders didn’t have straight noses and aristocratic good-looks — they had club feet!

You ‘murder’ instead of ‘murderer’ a couple of times. Just a minor thing.

Great job - I’ll be looking for your next update! =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for picking out the mistakes! I fixed them. :) And thanks for the review, glad you liked the chapter.