Reviewer: Arwynn
Date: 02/24/08 0:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was insanely wonderful. I can't really describe it...

Perfect, I suppose, but that wouldn't do it justice.

My all-time favorite, because out of all of these wonderful stories here at MNFF, this is one of the best. Excellent writing, subject, imagery...

Your descriptions were so real I could see and taste what exactly that conflicted Dementor was feeling. Wow!

All in all: Dude... you rock.

('Kay, so I sound a little fanatical, but really. Sorry, don't want to be "creepily obsessed" or anything; this story blew me away.)

...

Ack! I can't get over it!!

Reviewer: elaryn
Date: 11/23/07 4:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow. This story was really well-done. The descriptions, choice of words and characterisations were excellent, and what an original point-of-view from which to tell the story.

Reviewer: Methadose
Date: 11/13/07 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Beautifully written! I loved the way you used food in the descriptions of the memories, it really increased the feeling you were aiming for.

Reviewer: DarkMaurader
Date: 11/08/07 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is so creative! I'm very impressed...
Definitely not the usual, over-done fanfic. Thanks!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 11/02/07 20:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like the description you used. It's interesting to think of a Dementor a different way.
Was the man the Dementor gave the kiss to anybody, or just some guy?
Great job!

Reviewer: amzing
Date: 10/29/07 13:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

how sad... i really like the emotion you showed in this fic....i never thought of a dementor of having feelings..but i gues its possible...i really liked it but i was sorry how it ended..youre a good

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 10/25/07 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Woo-hoo! Dementor fic!

I was slightly confused by it, but I'm just crazy. It's ultimate coolness outweighed the bad things, though- you must have put a lot of thought into this. Congrats!

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 10/25/07 16:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

fascinating. I really like some of your imagery. do the dementors really die after they suck out the souls? I suppose it doesn't really matter. I have wondered for a long time how they die, and how they breed for that matter, ever since jkr mentioned it at the beginning of book 6.
if you could get some kind of unique voice for this story, something that includes the dementor's lack of a soul, his ravening hunger, rather than having it just be in the third person, that would be very very cool. I love all the food imagery. I love how you tied this in to canon.
it kind of puts me in mind of forrest gump actually, the way he pops up in all these important events...your dementor just keeps reoccurring at the same important plot points in harry's story....
super awesome!

Reviewer: Midnight109
Date: 10/25/07 15:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow just...wow. Not many people actually take the time to write stuff like this. Definitely one of the most unique fics I've ever read.

Reviewer: HellFromPeeves
Date: 10/25/07 15:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was by far the most amazing thing I have read in a long, long time.

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