Reviewer: Sucker4nethingHP
Date: 10/24/07 19:46
Chapter: One-Shot

hmmm, very interesting.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

Reviewer: BVBandGirl
Date: 10/24/07 19:01
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow, this is a very interesting version of what could have happened. I love the last line... ended the story on a good note. Great writting!

Author's Response: Thanks, I am a canon freak. I had to make sure everything ended the way it should have.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 10/24/07 19:00
Chapter: One-Shot

Interesting... A little creepy, mind, but a good fic! I liked seeing only tiny bits of each life, but still understanding what Hermione had to go through. This idea is very original and quite haunting. I'm glad she finally broke the curse! I really felt sorry for Hermione! And all the alternative endings were creative and believable. Only one thing: I don't see Snape calling Hermione "Muggle-born". It just seems strage. Oh, and there's no apostrophe in Hogwarts. Otherwise, a really intriguing, well-written fic!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review. I made the edits you pointed out, thanks. It gets a little hard to see that stuff after reading it for the thousandth time. As for Snape calling Hermione Muggle-born...I had a real hard time with that. The sentence called for an insult, but Mudblood was way too much. I had to resort back to what we knew of Snape at that time. After careful consideration, seeing as Hermione, Ron and Harry had just made him look like a fool in front of Sirius and Remus...'Muggle-born' sounded best. If you have suggestions...I will gladly hear them! THanks again!

Reviewer: osier
Date: 10/24/07 18:15
Chapter: One-Shot

WOW wow and WOW

Author's Response: Thanks, Thanks and thanks!

Reviewer: Incantia
Date: 10/24/07 16:41
Chapter: One-Shot

This is an AMAZING story! I love the pace of it, it fits so well with the plot. I think this works as a one-shot perfectly, but maybe you could do some one shots of some of Hermione's lives. I'd love to see some of the briefly mentioned scenes in this story developed into more.

Author's Response: The first time someone mentioned making this into a chaptered story I was really a bit upset. I felt like the whole point and flow of this story was the fact that "unbelivably off-canon" events were mentioned casually and quickly then moved on from before the reader had a chance to process what was said. The fourth unforgivable curse, or Hermione's dark mark come to mind, but there were many others. I thought that was the point. However, upon review after review on another site, I began to rethink the idea. Still debating it. Perhaps one-shots, I think that may work! Thanks!

Reviewer: Pussycat123
Date: 10/24/07 14:58
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow. That's amazing! A really original story. The writing seemed a little clumsy at times, with occasional mistakes (Gryffindor Towel instead of Tower, and when she is listing her sons, she says Ablus James, which I presume means "Albus James", only spelt wrong) but the story and mystery that is incorporated really carries it through! Honestly, I think it's an amazing idea.

As for making it a chaptered fic ... it's a good idea, but I kind of like it how it is, I think it's nice this length - it kind of gives it a rushed, impatient feel, which works with the story, because I would imagine you would get pretty impatient living the same life over and over again ... so it works the way it is, I think.

Congratulations on a really original and interesting fic, anyway!

Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review, I am really glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 10/24/07 13:19
Chapter: One-Shot

wow!
this is absolutely excellent albeit dark and angsty
would'nt it be terrible to go through all that - poor, poor, hermione
i like how you have made it all completley possible.
And clever thinking up how small events could change a whole outcome
excellent


Author's Response: Thanks! That's the philosophy behind time travel as I see it. One event, however small, can and will change everything. I am really glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: starkllr
Date: 10/24/07 13:01
Chapter: One-Shot

Excellent work!

I would very much like to read a longer, chaptered version of this. I think you did a good job of showing the weariness and pain that Hermione experienced.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am currently outlining something longer. PLS add me to your faves and I will keep you updated.

Reviewer: Auror Tonks
Date: 10/24/07 12:59
Chapter: One-Shot

BLOODY BRILLANT!!! the BEST fic on the site, best fic i hav EVER read!!!!! plse rite more coz this fic is soo gd!!!

Author's Response: Well thank you for your kind words. I have more coming, pls add me to your faves and will keep you updated.

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