Reviewer: Ravenclaw_Lives_On
Date: 06/22/06 9:22
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

*sniff* Great story!

Reviewer: LiliacFleur
Date: 05/13/06 17:26
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

That was a nice story, and I liked your ideas. Who doesn't love a bit of Lily/James fluff? One thing I could say though is that the story would have been better if there was more detail in some areas. Perhaps when James faces the dementor in the classroom you could describe what he's feeling as it happens, and not just have him tell the others afterwards, and little things like that? Great story though.

Reviewer: mini_marauder
Date: 05/05/06 21:47
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

wow that was really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really rreally good i loved it as u can tell and i hope to read more of your stories soon!

Author's Response: thanks =] i'll try to get more up soon, hopefully

Reviewer: Mozshow10
Date: 04/15/06 21:21
Chapter: It Just Felt Right

AWWWWW!!! So sweet that was amazing! I loved it!

Author's Response: aww thanks ^_^

Reviewer: MioneJGWeasley
Date: 04/15/06 19:44
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

*SOB* the end...

lily, take harry and run! he's here! *sobs louder*

very good job.

Author's Response: thankyou =]

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 04/12/06 11:21
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

that was a great story. i loved it and i am bummecd that it is all over. this story was origional and it was just great. the only thing i would change would be to see more of a connection between james and lily. like, more....lovey-dovey...not mushy gross, but yet more.....more....fluff. anyway, great story.

Author's Response: yeah. thanks for ur input =] i wrote this story so long ago... like about a year and a half ago. christmas 04

Reviewer: marauderin_monkey
Date: 04/09/06 14:06
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

omg i love it i'll be lookin out for toys by you ;)

Author's Response: hehe thanks

Reviewer: JC_Cainstone
Date: 04/06/06 3:56
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

So original! So sweet! So funny!! A good fanfic! Yay!!!

Author's Response: aww thank u!!!

Reviewer: themodernmarauders
Date: 03/07/06 1:38
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

your story was really good. i especially enjoyed the james/lily swapping bodies thing - very funny. i also liked how you made your characters so interesting and likeable please write more stories

Author's Response: ok i will. thanku very much =)

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 11/19/05 3:55
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

Wow your story was wicked! I noticed the same things that harry potter star did but other than those little things it was perfect! I loved how you kept putting your little comments in the writing and I thought the whole switching bodies thing was a really original idea (plus it was very funny. When I was reading it I kept thinking that you were going to give Lily her period while James was in her body lol) Great story and I look forward to reading your others!

Author's Response: haha thanks! =]

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 10/06/05 1:06
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

that was a pretty good story, there were a few mistakes that I picked up though. (please dont hate me for pointing these out!) number 1 waaay back in the beginning, wen james and Lily were going through the whole switcharoo thing, In one charms lesson, Professor Flitwick's name changes to professor Salsa out of nowhere. Number two- Sirius explained how after James had been missing for a week, everyone decided to alert Profesor Dumbledore. Okay, with that, if you were in the middle of a dark and scary forest, and the most powerful and dangerous wizard of all time with a rep for killing people showed up and kidnapped your bbf, would you wait a week before finally telling one of the teachers that he'd gone missing? Number three- You said that he was found in the chamber of secrets, but in harry potter and the chamber of secrets, it was said that dumbledore had had the school searched many times and was sure that no such place existed! Now, please don't get me wrong, I loved the story, adn your writing style, and i especially loved the first section, I just thought I'd let you know about the mistakes. keep writing! ~Sophie~

Author's Response: thanks, yeah i noticed i did the salsa thing too lol

Reviewer: harry_potter_star
Date: 10/05/05 23:45
Chapter: I Didn't Mean To Do That!!

This is a really funny and good story, the only thing id like to ask is why does professor flitwicks name change to professor salsa when he reads out that lily and remus have to work together?

Author's Response: lol yeah sry bout that, it started as professor salso but i guess i forgot to change that part

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/14/05 11:01
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

That was such a cool chappoe, it proves Harry's magic is really advanced seeing as he can fight off a dementor and James had to do it jointly wiv Sirius. 10!!

Author's Response: wowiecaboodles u rock dude!! i never thought of it that way, but it totally shed sum liht on the subject, thanx!!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/12/05 10:29
Chapter: It Just Felt Right

I LOVE James/Lily fluff. This is so cute. I really like this story. Fave quote: 'In the past seventeen minutes, Hazel had consumed approximately 27.9 pounds of sugar and it had all entered her bloodstream. In simpler terms, Hazel was officially high on sugar'

Author's Response: lolol that was soooo my fav chapter to write! and i can't resist lily/james fluff. they r just soooo cute together!!!! :):)

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/11/05 7:32
Chapter: Wormtail is a Rat

rlly good. I love the past mirror thing.

Author's Response: thanx dude! u ppl rock my sox!!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/11/05 7:22
Chapter: I Didn't Mean To Do That!!

HAHAHAHAHA Ha. I love Switch stories. :):):):) This one is my faveourite. :):):)

Author's Response: wow thanx!!! :)

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/11/05 7:15
Chapter: The Switch

Coolieo! That is so funny. My fave line : "James why are you laughing maniaccly?" "No reason." he said shortly. Sirius nodded to show he understood.

Author's Response: lol i love randomness!! lolool

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/16/05 2:54
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

boo hoo hoo :'( ah well, it was good while it lasted! bravo, i salute u!

Author's Response: wowie thanx! i loved writing this story--it was my first lily and james ever!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/16/05 2:35
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

omg, yea! but it probs be for james or sirius tho. ANYday, even if it was for school work.

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/16/05 2:35
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

omg, yea! but it probs be for james or sirius tho. ANYday, even if it was for school work.

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