I....I....*starts sobbing and falling over, crying my head off* I can't believe I finished this!!!
*as hagrid said, 'tha' was beau'ful!'
I LOVED THIS have you done any other Lily/James fics? rest assured i will read them!!! I love this, and my gosh, even though this all isn't real (seeing as Molly is supposed to be Prewet, not Jones, for one thing) I still adored it. What made it especially sweet was that I didn't have to desperately wait for the next chapter to be published. But, oh, I am sad to have to leave this story behind! No. 1 fan! *sniffs* *breathes deeply* *starts crying again* Bye then......if u wrote any other fic, look out for me!!
Author's Response: thank you so much :) unfortunately, I haven't really written much in a few months, maybe I'll start again soon
Excellent job, now I would like to continue..........p.s. i love this a lot!!!
Brilliant! great job! Now may I read the next chapter? Great. *doesn't hesitate to click 'next'*
Loved it. You've no idea how relieved I was to see the 'Next' link. a problem i have is a tendancy to read wonderful stories that aren't finished....great job =)
I am soo glad this is finished- isn't it? Because if it wasn't, this would be yet ANOTHER story I was desperately waiting to be updated......
This is good. I can't wait to read the rest! I'm kinda freaked about what's gonna happen.
i really really like the story. But i dont think you should be writing A/N through out the story about how ur 2 lazy to think of things to write. It takes away fromthe story. Other then that i really like it and cant wait to finish reading it.
OMG! WOW WOW WOW WOW! u are soooo going on my favourites!
pretty good so far- you have great ideas. keep up the good work:)
Just two words: LOVED IT!! Very well written.
*is confused, while full of laughter at the same time* What the...James was gone because of Voldemort, and the only started getting worried after some time?
Gigglesnort. But I think you may have just been trying to finish the story up, so that's allright.
"""If you take it out through it's anus, it doesn't die. But if you extract it from it's throat, then and only then, it dies." she finished.""
Aww, dude *laughs* Referring to the anus part. You could've said anything.
Deep, but not profound. Canon error: Arthur and Molly were not in Hogwarts during the Marauders' Era. In the Goblet of Fire, when the Weasleys come to see Harry perform the final task in the triwizard tornament, JKR says that Molly was fasinated by the Whomping Willow, which "Had been planted after she had left Hogwarts". We know that The willow was planted in Lupin's first eyar. Also, the plot could be a bit better. I liked it over all, though.
Well, the idea wasn't bad, and the story wasn't bad either, but I have a few comments.
-The spelling isn't quite what it should be.
-The author's notes all over the place between the story are VERY annoying.
-James is gone for a week, WITH Voldemort, and nobody notices anything or does anything...?
-Molly is older than Lily in the books.
-James dreams "Lily, take Harry and run! He's here!" all the time and it doesn't worry him one little bit?!
So it wasn't a bad story, but it could be better. I would also have liked to see more James-Lily... though what I did like very much, were the earrings he gave her and the ring she gave him.
James and Lily, Always & Forever... SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOB.
That story was and is wonderful! I give it two thumbs up!
This chapter was by far the best to me!
I really liked the story but, I have one comment. Lily's friend Molly is supposed to be Molly Wealey right? But her second YOUNGEST son is the same age as Lily's OLDEST (and only). That would put Molly already having five boys before she even left school. Oh, well. I really enjoyed this fic.
I really liked the story but, I have one comment. Lily's friend Molly is supposed to be Molly Wealey right? But her second YOUNGEST son is the same age as Lily's OLDEST (and only). That would put Molly already having five boys before she even left school. Oh, well. I really enjoyed this fic.
