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Name: werewolfxlover (Signed) · Date: 10/05/12 5:28 · For: Padfoot's Grim Surprise
I love your stories but wasn't james's patronronus a stag?


Name: werewolfxlover (Signed) · Date: 10/05/12 5:27 · For: Any Dream Will Do
Wasent lily's patronis a doe?


Name: werewolfxlover (Signed) · Date: 10/05/12 5:21 · For: Any Dream Will Do
Wasent lily's patronis a doe?


Name: werewolfxlover (Signed) · Date: 10/05/12 4:59 · For: Padfoot's Grim Surprise
I love your stories but wasn't james's patronronus a stag?


Name: ilyjean (Signed) · Date: 08/13/12 8:43 · For: Any Dream Will Do
Overall, it was an amazing story and I did enjoy it. However, there were some errors like patronuses, people's name's and ages. There were a few grammar/spelling mistakes(sorry to be picky), and sometimes when you put in comments it got a tad confusing. Apart from that, excellent story.


Name: CharmFlicka (Signed) · Date: 12/25/09 23:53 · For: Any Dream Will Do
it might just be me, but is McGonagall spelled with 2 L's or one?


Name: CharmFlicka (Signed) · Date: 12/25/09 23:51 · For: Any Dream Will Do
i dont meanto critisize this ttly awesome story or anything, but you keep spelling ecstatic and ecstasy a little bit funky (smiles)


Name: Sweet Lily (Signed) · Date: 12/05/09 19:21 · For: Any Dream Will Do
Oh my god that was an awesome story! you definitely had me close to tears at the end with the rest of the characters! Also, before the newts i was almost having a stress attack, for the newts! don't ask me how, but it's probably because you're such a good writer!
~karin


Name: death2008 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/09 9:16 · For: Any Dream Will Do
but james' prtonus is a stag and lily's is a doe!


Name: morning coffee writer (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 12:27 · For: Any Dream Will Do

Ahhh, so sad! I loved it thought! The whole story, not just this chapter. Are you squeemish by any chance?

Ps. You said Snape was a greasy ass "whole" but it's ass "hole." It's ok, everyone knows what you mean.



Name: morning coffee writer (Signed) · Date: 08/07/08 11:31 · For: Padfoot's Grim Surprise
Thanks for adding in the bit of escitement about the dementors, saving an otherwise boring chapter. But it was informal and important. I liked it.


Name: morning coffee writer (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 20:01 · For: Wormtail is a Rat
HAHAHAHAHA! I would normally ask how going to school would change omeone's sexual orientation, but that was too hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I loved Sirius's too! So he was homeless by 14, father by 16... Was he a male prosititue or something? Anyway, I LOVE this chapter!


Name: morning coffee writer (Signed) · Date: 08/06/08 19:03 · For: I Didn't Mean To Do That!!
Why in the world would James want to use those spells to go to the bathroom and change clothes? Other than that, I love it!


Name: SecretWeasley (Signed) · Date: 07/31/08 18:54 · For: Any Dream Will Do
Great Sotry ive read it twice but ive just realised that although this ws probably written before it was revealsed that Molly had a brother named Fabian and a brother called Gideon and these are the Prewitts so Mollys maiden name would have been Prewitt but other wise amazing story


Name: RowenaHeart (Signed) · Date: 03/02/08 15:46 · For: Any Dream Will Do
undescribable.


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/25/08 11:40 · For: Any Dream Will Do
oh this was a good story i liked it good good good


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/24/08 15:49 · For: Padfoot's Grim Surprise
OOhh is the dementor gonna show up later on???


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/24/08 12:32 · For: It Just Felt Right
aaaaawwwwwww cute cute cute love it love it

Hazel had stopped five times along the way to gaze at the "pretty sky thingy".
that was my fave part


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/23/08 21:30 · For: Wormtail is a Rat
okay ive found but one flaw in this lovely story, its that molly and aurthur are like ten years older than lilly and james because lilly and james had harry when they were in their early twentys and by that time molly and arthur already had six kids the oldest being at least ten-ish dont get me wrong im not criticizing im just scrutinizing y'know just a fun fact to remember *gives you a friendly smile*

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 02/23/08 20:41 · For: I Didn't Mean To Do That!!
whew im glad they figured those spells out i was begining to worry about-ahem-that

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~


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