Reviewer: werewolfxlover
Date: 10/05/12 5:28
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

I love your stories but wasn't james's patronronus a stag?

Reviewer: werewolfxlover
Date: 10/05/12 5:27
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

Wasent lily's patronis a doe?

Reviewer: werewolfxlover
Date: 10/05/12 5:21
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

Wasent lily's patronis a doe?

Reviewer: werewolfxlover
Date: 10/05/12 4:59
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

I love your stories but wasn't james's patronronus a stag?

Reviewer: ilyjean
Date: 08/13/12 8:43
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

Overall, it was an amazing story and I did enjoy it. However, there were some errors like patronuses, people's name's and ages. There were a few grammar/spelling mistakes(sorry to be picky), and sometimes when you put in comments it got a tad confusing. Apart from that, excellent story.

Reviewer: CharmFlicka
Date: 12/25/09 23:53
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

it might just be me, but is McGonagall spelled with 2 L's or one?

Reviewer: CharmFlicka
Date: 12/25/09 23:51
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

i dont meanto critisize this ttly awesome story or anything, but you keep spelling ecstatic and ecstasy a little bit funky (smiles)

Reviewer: Sweet Lily
Date: 12/05/09 19:21
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

Oh my god that was an awesome story! you definitely had me close to tears at the end with the rest of the characters! Also, before the newts i was almost having a stress attack, for the newts! don't ask me how, but it's probably because you're such a good writer!
~karin

Reviewer: death2008
Date: 09/02/09 9:16
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

but james' prtonus is a stag and lily's is a doe!

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/07/08 12:27
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

Ahhh, so sad! I loved it thought! The whole story, not just this chapter. Are you squeemish by any chance?

Ps. You said Snape was a greasy ass "whole" but it's ass "hole." It's ok, everyone knows what you mean.

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/07/08 11:31
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

Thanks for adding in the bit of escitement about the dementors, saving an otherwise boring chapter. But it was informal and important. I liked it.

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/06/08 20:01
Chapter: Wormtail is a Rat

HAHAHAHAHA! I would normally ask how going to school would change omeone's sexual orientation, but that was too hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I loved Sirius's too! So he was homeless by 14, father by 16... Was he a male prosititue or something? Anyway, I LOVE this chapter!

Reviewer: morning coffee writer
Date: 08/06/08 19:03
Chapter: I Didn't Mean To Do That!!

Why in the world would James want to use those spells to go to the bathroom and change clothes? Other than that, I love it!

Reviewer: SecretWeasley
Date: 07/31/08 18:54
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

Great Sotry ive read it twice but ive just realised that although this ws probably written before it was revealsed that Molly had a brother named Fabian and a brother called Gideon and these are the Prewitts so Mollys maiden name would have been Prewitt but other wise amazing story

Reviewer: RowenaHeart
Date: 03/02/08 15:46
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

undescribable.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/25/08 11:40
Chapter: Any Dream Will Do

oh this was a good story i liked it good good good

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/24/08 15:49
Chapter: Padfoot's Grim Surprise

OOhh is the dementor gonna show up later on???

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/24/08 12:32
Chapter: It Just Felt Right

aaaaawwwwwww cute cute cute love it love it

Hazel had stopped five times along the way to gaze at the "pretty sky thingy".
that was my fave part

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/23/08 21:30
Chapter: Wormtail is a Rat

okay ive found but one flaw in this lovely story, its that molly and aurthur are like ten years older than lilly and james because lilly and james had harry when they were in their early twentys and by that time molly and arthur already had six kids the oldest being at least ten-ish dont get me wrong im not criticizing im just scrutinizing y'know just a fun fact to remember *gives you a friendly smile*

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/23/08 20:41
Chapter: I Didn't Mean To Do That!!

whew im glad they figured those spells out i was begining to worry about-ahem-that

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

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