Reviewer: TheDogStar12
Date: 11/19/07 20:11
Chapter: On Top of the World

Hmm? That was weird. Only the first sentence of my review appeared. o_O Here's what the whole thing said:

Gosh, I love this. My friend emailed it to be, telling me to prepare to cry, and sure enough, as soon as Remus died, I burst out in both tears and laughter. It's so sad, and yet so happy. =)

Author's Response: when i first read this i thought you meant my story was weird and i was like ok thanks.. haha and then i read the rest & now I <3 u! thanks so so much, and i'm really glad you liked it. tell your friend thanks from me for spreading the word!!!

Reviewer: TheDogStar12
Date: 11/19/07 20:10
Chapter: On Top of the World

Gosh, I love this.

Author's Response: ^^ haha

Reviewer: voldiegirl
Date: 11/10/07 12:53
Chapter: On Top of the World

I love this story! It is so sweet and I can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 11/04/07 10:06
Chapter: On Top of the World

Thank you so much for the tip on how to add my story correctly. It worked, and hopefully it will be approved. :D

Author's Response: yay! tell me when/if it gets approved so i can read& review back!

Reviewer: dreams_wishes17
Date: 10/29/07 19:41
Chapter: On Top of the World

Wow. That was amazing. So beautifully written. *Sniffle* The first half had me crying, and I don't cry very often! I loved Dumbledore's line at the end.

Author's Response: thank you! i'm sorry you cried, though... yeah, dumbledore's line leaves the opening for the sequel which hopefully will be up soon.

Reviewer: dreams_wishes17
Date: 10/29/07 19:40
Chapter: On Top of the World

Wow. That was amazing. So beautifully written. *Sniffle* The first half had me crying, and I don't cry very often! I loved Dumbledore's line at the end.

Author's Response: =D

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 10/28/07 19:52
Chapter: On Top of the World

This was great! There was just enough sadness to make it real, but the ending was sweet, so you don't walk away from reading this depressed.
I'd love to see a sequel!

Author's Response: merci! reviews like this brighten up my horrible day! (haha term's ending & i have about ten exams.) anyway i will get going on that sequel this weekend probably.

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 10/28/07 11:32
Chapter: On Top of the World

I have a quick ? for u, even though it has nothing to do with ur story. I am trying to submit my own story, but whenever I press submit, it tells me to log in. I don't know what to do, so I thought I might try asking for a fellow author's help. Please, could you write an author's response to this, cuz I am desperate!!!!!!

Author's Response: i hate when that happens. usually what i do is log out then log back in before i submit. after that, i go & put in my story, and then copy & paste it just in case it still tells me to log back in. it usually doesn't if you have just logged back out and in but it's best to have it copied so you can paste back in if neccessary. if it tells you to log in, you can then do so and then resubmit your story. i have never had it not work after doing those things so it should be fine. sorry if this doesn't help!

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 10/27/07 12:33
Chapter: On Top of the World

Yes, I would love for you to write a sequel. I just read your story again, and I cried again. Only really amazing authors can make someone feel like that! :)

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: DontCallMeNymphadora
Date: 10/24/07 20:07
Chapter: On Top of the World

I love your story. It made me cry so hard, especially when Lupin died and asked Tonks where his son was. That was soo sad. I don't think any other fanfiction where Tonks and Remus died has ever made me cry that hard before. You are an amazing author, and I hope you write more stories.

How did you find out that a member of the Order brought their bodies inside? Do you know who?

Again, luv the story.

Author's Response: THANK you i am soo glad you like it!!! i don 't know if a member of the order actually brought in their bodies but for my story to work that was what had to happen. just for it to agree w/ canon- because we know they were inside later. would you be interested in a sequel? anyway, thank you!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 10/24/07 16:33
Chapter: On Top of the World

This was heartwrenching, beautiful, and wonderful. I was actually listening to the song while i was reading =)
Great job!

Author's Response: thanks!!! :DD

Reviewer: ScarlettQuill
Date: 10/24/07 12:40
Chapter: On Top of the World

Great story, i always cry when i read about Remus and Tonks dying and this was no exception but i liked the ending, it cheered me up a bit. Please write a sequel, i'd love to read it!

Author's Response: i'm glad the ending made it less painful (writing made me less sad that they died... ;D) i will work on the sequel!

Reviewer: tonkzie
Date: 10/24/07 5:13
Chapter: On Top of the World

that was so realistic. i can actually imagine it happening! so good. i'm writing a fic at mo and if you have some tips could u share? it's my first time. great story!

Author's Response: yeah, sure. i am a beta for Perfect Imagination if you want to contact me through that or you can send it to me through an email if its easier. (my PI name is MaryKatePeverell) thanks for the compliments!!

Reviewer: FlightofthePhoenix
Date: 10/24/07 1:20
Chapter: On Top of the World

This is a wonderful story, i really enjoyed it. You mentioned about a sequel planned? I would love to read it. Great story! Nicole :)

Author's Response: i will get working on it & hopefully submit sometime in November. it is more about Teddy though.

Reviewer: wewillmissyou
Date: 10/23/07 22:12
Chapter: On Top of the World

'Another child orphaned by the conflicts of adults; what a cruel world it was sometimes.'

Great Line!

I was crying after the second set of lyrics. I do love that song and I am impressed you mangaed to incorparate with Tonks/Lupin.

Very, Very, Very, Good Job!

*adds to her favorites*

Author's Response: thank you!! i love that song too and i'm glad you think it fits!! i was actually really proud of that line b/c i thought it sort of sounded like something Jo would have written...i'm glad you like it too!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/23/07 17:11
Chapter: On Top of the World

*sniff* now i'm depressed! in a good way though. that song is really good. great story!

Author's Response: thanks!

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