Reviews For A Little More Time
Reviewer: dragoneyes1029
Date: 04/21/09 16:02
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

Great story!

Reviewer: linnealovegood
Date: 04/19/09 19:03
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

soooooooooooooooooooofantastic. i heard the first half of this story on audiofiction, and looked it up to finish it. amazing suspense, and stunning plot. i love it.

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 03/06/09 11:50
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

I had read uptil Chapter 12 a few months back and was out of touch with MNFF and the moment I logged on and saw the rest of the story, I started reading as fast I could.

WOW! This has got to be one of the best fanfictions on MNFF that I've ever read.

My favourite part of the epilogue was
“You didn’t hear? At the end of that awful year, a few weeks before the battle, Professor Carrow had Binns exorcised.”
I don't know why, but for some reason, I laughed hysterically at this part, just trying to picture how it all went down!

Reviewer: BrianG
Date: 02/10/09 17:56
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

Great Story

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 11/15/08 9:14
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

Oops, I accidentally submitted my review for the prologue instead of the epilogue. But I guess you figured that out. ;-)

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 11/15/08 9:12
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

Hi Pallas,

I just want to thank you for bringing Remus and Tonks back to life!! I was devastated after reading DH that they both died. This story made my day! Even though, I have to admit, for a short moment I thought you'd actually let them get killed again. ;-)

So now, after reading the entire story, I am grinning like an idiot. :D (I'm glad I'm alone now, so no one can see it. They'd probably sent me to a madhouse right away.;-))

Thank you, thank you, thank you!! Re-reading DH will be much less painful now. Please, keep on writing these great stories.

Best regards,

Reviewer: dragoneyes1029
Date: 10/22/08 23:16
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

I enjoyed this. Good job!

Reviewer: mauradersometimes
Date: 10/21/08 7:45
Chapter: Threads


Reviewer: mauradersometimes
Date: 10/21/08 7:30
Chapter: Facing Fate

Oh this is so good and amazing! I cried my way all through this chapter and I'm still sniffing now. Your writing is really powerful and conveys their emotions and the horror of that situation really well. It made me feel so much for anyone who has ever had to wait for a member of their family's death sentence.
So yeah it's really good! and I'm so glad you didn't end it where your beta suggested... we needed that hope! :)

Reviewer: lmcayton
Date: 09/17/08 19:25
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

Wow....thank YOU! that was an amazing story, leaving us readers guessing until the very end!
~Braire Rose and Lyn

Reviewer: lmcayton
Date: 09/17/08 19:01
Chapter: Threads

So, now that Briare Rose literally read the next section of the story aloud.... I must say that it made me cry, several times....and that I apologise for the flame.

Reviewer: lmcayton
Date: 09/17/08 18:32
Chapter: Out of Time

NOOOOOOO!!!! GOD...NOOO!!!!!!! Argh! I refuse to read any more! I thought that there would be a happy ending, but clearly, unless the three abstentions vote in their favor, it will not be happy! Therefore....I will make up another ending in my head and not read any further!

Reviewer: Linwe Ferland
Date: 08/26/08 19:22
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

I loved this story, i even cried my heart out when i thought they'd be sent back!! well done

Reviewer: decdraft
Date: 08/06/08 22:04
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

Brilliant. Bloody brilliant. This should be canon. Thank you for bringing Remus and Tonks back!

Reviewer: Bee AKA Ted
Date: 07/17/08 5:15
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

well what can i say
a story that was thought provoking
i never realised just how much i hated having lupin and tonks killed off
but tis nice to see that here at least they lived a happy life =]

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 07/08/08 9:21
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

Great Story I Really Like it..

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 06/18/08 0:58
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

You have an LJ? *runs off to find* I absolutely love how you managed to give my favourite family the happy ending I really really hoped they would have. And I shall most certainly be perusing your archived fics quite soon! Wonderful job, all round.

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 06/17/08 21:03
Chapter: The Bigger Picture

This is such an excellent story! My only issue with it is that I've been at my computer for three hours reading it when I should be packing for a mini-trip tomorrow... Oh well. Thanks for writing this :) I really like your writing style!!

Reviewer: scruffy100
Date: 06/07/08 22:50
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

i have this huge smile i can feel stretching across my face after reading this

Reviewer: DragonDi
Date: 06/06/08 17:46
Chapter: Facing Fate

I'll bawl like a baby at a good movie, but it's difficult to make me cry with the written word. The last book I shed tears over was DH (stupid page 661). I've read THIS story over three times, from beginning to end, and this chapter has made me tear up every time. It is so emotionally powerful. Amazing job!

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