Reviews For A Little More Time
Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 23:09
Chapter: Restraint

Bloody awesome!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 22:46
Chapter: The Heart of the Matter

Awesome.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 21:53
Chapter: Trust

Becoming more and more interesting. I like the way the storyline is going. This is fun. At least so far.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 13:42
Chapter: Rhythms

Getting a little scary. Would be nice if Teddy could get to visit with his parents for a little while. Life is not, has not been, nor will it ever be fair. If his friends told him it wasn't his time and sent him back, to which time did they send him? Actual time or future time? Will it determine how long he has to live depending on which time frame? Tonks would not want to be in any time without him. I'm trusting the Marauder's were sending him to live in his baby son's future so they could know each other and the three of them live happily ever after. There is so much(i.e. everything) that Teddy never thought of or even considered about either of his parents before he brought them back. Reality is going to suck a little for Teddy, hoping it will only be for a very short time and then the happy ever after part starts.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 2:09
Chapter: Family Circus

Awesome story. This is flowing really well. Keeps your attention. I'm liking it.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 1:49
Chapter: Consequences

What a fantastically great story. So real, so much fun to read, so easy to visualize everything going on. Can't wait to see who's at the fireplace!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 1:01
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

Things don't usually go as planned in life, we hope our plans work out but that's not usually the case, even if it is for something good. Always comes back to bite us in more ways than one.
Good story

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 0:35
Chapter: Damage

Oh shit.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/29/09 0:16
Chapter: Memories

Laughing all the way through this one. Well maybe not with the remembered pain part, but the good stuff Remus dreamed that maybe will turn the tide of Ministry opinion about what's happened. The other three had been dead for 4 and 17 yrs? They may very well know when someone is expected, maybe Remus wasn't supposed to die and Teddy was meant to rescue them both? Good angle. Still liking this story.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/28/09 23:06
Chapter: In Memoriam

More fun by the chapter. I'm guessing Tonks might be slightly more knowledgeable about what might happen to Teddy when someone finds out. Having fun with this.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/28/09 22:45
Chapter: Protection

This is a really good story. The plotline is pretty intense. Tonks and Remus are not going to be happy campers here. There is no way Harry isn't going to find out. Actually I'm pretty sure he knows and now has to figure a way to keep Teddy out of Azkaban for the rest of his life.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/28/09 22:12
Chapter: Til Death Do Us Part

You really are in sssoooo much trouble Teddy. And now you have to sell your parents, who have technically been dead for 20 yrs, on the idea that they shouldn't punish him for what he did. Though I'm betting Tonks could think of a few punishments worse than what the Ministry is going to do, 'cause they certainly aren't going to let this slip through the cracks.
I like the story a lot. Like your characters, life the dialogue. Remus coming through the Portal was excellent writing.
Don't think this is going to get dull anytime soon.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/27/09 23:51
Chapter: For Better or Worse

Terrific effort. But something didn't go according to plan. Where's Remus? I'll find out soon I hope.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/27/09 23:35
Chapter: Making Luck

Careful what you wish for Teddy.
Good story. Very real characters. Very interesting plot. Time to read on.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/27/09 23:16
Chapter: 1: Promises

Teddy you are in ssssooooo much trouble. Or, maybe not. Things never turn out as you wish they would. Some things could get a lot worse. Time to read on and find out.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 06/27/09 22:31
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

This might not turn out to be such a good idea Ted. You might want to think a little more about what Uncle Harry said. You might have everything blow up in your face. Then again, it could turn out great. On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: sziget
Date: 06/21/09 16:27
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

My most sincere gratitude for this greatly composed and fascinating story, Pallas! Thank you SO much. Very well written, characters well-developed and kept in theirs... Oh, and Remus and Tonks so wittyly saved.

Yes, thank you!

Reviewer: galaxydefender
Date: 05/25/09 15:29
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

okay, so I started out listening to this on AudioFictions, and I loved it so much I created an account so I could read it in its entirety and comment on it. And may I just say that this is THE BEST HP fanfiction I have ever read, and ties for first place for best fic ever. It made me smile, laugh, cry, and everything in between. So well done to you. Thanks, as well, for providing me with such wonderful reading. :)

Reviewer: Ginny19994
Date: 05/23/09 2:50
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

Wow. I have to admit that the only reason I even read this was because of audiofictions. I listened to the first fourteen chapters and had to keep reading for myself. It was perfect and I loved the happy ending - even though it didn't seem as if the ending would be happy for a chapter or two near the end there. Lupin and Tonks have to be two of my favorites as well and I like the spin you put on time travel. It was brilliant and I hope that you keep writing. Good luck in all you do. ~Ginny19994

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 04/30/09 23:16
Chapter: Epilogue: Beyond the Portal

Have I mentioned how much a ADORE this story? seriously. i think i've probably reviewed like this before, but it's JUST THAT AWESOME.

 

I've accepted this as my own personal canon, because you made it SO BELIEVABLE. it actually really could happen. and you've NAILED the characterization....and i love your writing style...and i love that it's being audio-fic'd. basically, i ADORE this story. thank you for writing it!!!!

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