Reviews For A Little More Time
Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 12/15/07 21:47
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

Wow! It was stupid for Penny to go into the portal in the first place, but I hope she makes it. Poor Teddy, having to deal with all that.
Please, update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next! (No pun intended!)

Reviewer: beyond
Date: 12/15/07 9:06
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

Dang Teddy, what were you thinking?!?! Wow, that is soooo sad!! I have to know what happens next....

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 12/14/07 18:04
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

oh Poor Teddy! what a mess he has gotten into. Keep up the great story!

Reviewer: I_solemnly_swear
Date: 12/14/07 16:13
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

Oh no! Don't let Penny die! That would be awful! We need to find a way for this all to work out!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/14/07 11:56
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

Oh Boy, thats not good! Well written chapter =)

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 12/14/07 3:27
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

You really like teasing people, don't you? Ending two chapters in a row with the same cliff-hanger is cruel. Funny but cruel.

As usual, the writing and the story are both excellent. You've done a great job, throughout the story, illustrating Teddy's conflicted thoughts and emotions concerning his actions. Keep it up.

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 12/13/07 23:55
Chapter: Damage

*tries to breathe* I cannot believe that I only just discovered this story. It’s amazing! I’ve been a fan of pretty much all of your other stories, too, but this one almost got away from me!

First, it’s just a brilliant premise. It isn’t even technically AU! Remus and Tonks did “die”, but you invent a time machine, add a Metamorphamagus, and here we are: Remus and Tonks alive and well (relatively speaking). It’s so simple, but it’s so original, too.

The characterization is excellent. At first, I thought that Remus and Tonks were a bit off, but then I realized that it was because I was reading Teddy’s pov—it was weird only because he thought of them as “Mom” and “Dad”. When it came to reading them as “Remus” and “Tonks” again, they were perfect; as, of course, they had been the whole time.

Teddy is wonderful. He’s fairly mature, but also has some of that teen recklessness and act-first-think-later-ness to him. His relationship with Victoire makes me laugh—poor Remus, knowing way too much about his boy’s (sex) life.

“It’s telling me baby!” He could feel her gasping for breath as the tears soaked his shoulder. “Every fibre of me is going baby, baby, baby!...
This part was amazing. Maternal instinct is very much a physical/emotional thing; of course Tonks would be physically aware of her loss, and very much aware of her empty arms. She did essentially lose her baby—lost so many precious years. This entire story is amazing, but this part blew me away.

“Dad,” he whispered, his voice trembling. “I think I might have just got Penny Weasley killed.”
Ah. I was waiting for the conflict, but this is a lot stronger than I was expecting! Again, great job. There are so many things that could go wrong, but I expect this one has to do with the Portal…I’ll wait until the next chapter, I guess 

Wonderful, wonderful job! I can’t wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: clumsywerewolf2438
Date: 12/13/07 20:10
Chapter: 1: Promises

Oh, my gosh! I had an idea like that! Except it was me, not Teddy who did it (well, technically, Hermione did the spell) and wow! That's cool!

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 12/13/07 16:24
Chapter: Damage

Oh queen of the evil Cliffies! I want to know what happened to Penny!

Oh ok fine I'll wait!

*hmph!*

Great chapter! It's obvious that you put thought into what would happen if a person were to blink & 20 years were gone. You have quite a few things that I wouldn't think of yet would definitely happen. Hormonal Tonks is a big one. Please don't make us wait too long!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 12/10/07 20:41
Chapter: Damage

Holly Guacamole! I just read the last two chapters, and I was thinking, "oh, this is nice. Yes, there is a lot of emotional baggage, but that's to be expected." Then, WHAM! What happened to Penny? Did Teddy accidentally bring more than just his parents through the portal?
Please, update soon!

Reviewer: xo_Loony_Tuney_ox
Date: 12/10/07 2:34
Chapter: Damage

Finish it NOW!!!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 12/08/07 20:27
Chapter: Damage

OMG. what a horrible cliff-hanger!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 12/08/07 19:08
Chapter: Damage

oo suspense! the scene in the kitchen was really happy but now im all worried about penny. don't leave me wondering for long please!!!! great chapter.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 12/08/07 17:09
Chapter: Damage

WHAT?! EVERYTHING ELSE SEEMED SO MUCH MORE LIGHT (well not the beggining but the middle) and then Penny! noooooo please update soon, its such a cliffie!
I just want to also say that i love this story, it gives us interaction between the couple which u dont see at all in the books, much needed love between them!
I think this is my fav line in this chapter
“I still feel bloody strange about everything though. And I can’t keep morphing my chest to release the pressure of this ruddy milk or I’m going to end up looking like a cow with two enormous udders dangling from her…”
*snort* Its so funny! the image......
Please update soon, this is a great story!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/08/07 14:57
Chapter: Damage

Oh, Hurry and update quickly! Interesting cliffie at the end! :)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/08/07 14:08
Chapter: Damage

DUN DUN DUN!!! UPDATE SOOOOONN!!!

Reviewer: PrincessJasmine
Date: 12/08/07 11:05
Chapter: Damage

OMG cliffhanger!!!! update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Marauder4Life
Date: 12/08/07 10:04
Chapter: Damage

No Way!!! I need to know what happens next!

Reviewer: princessesierra
Date: 12/08/07 9:43
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

Ohh.... my god. :)

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 12/08/07 9:05
Chapter: Damage

Excellent chapter as always, my dear. And I'm eager to find out what's happened with Penny! Something wrong with the portal, I'm guessing?

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