Reviews For A Little More Time
Reviewer: x_GinnyPotter_x
Date: 01/07/08 18:40
Chapter: Rhythms

Cliffhanger!! If you were trying to keep the reader hooked, I must say it's working ; ) Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm thrilled to see you updating so frequently!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 18:13
Chapter: Protection

wonderful. ive got to stop here to do homework *moans in disgust* but this is so good i will probly be tempted to finish up to 13 after the dreaded evil called homework.

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 18:04
Chapter: Til Death Do Us Part


Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 17:53
Chapter: For Better or Worse

Oh man, that's really bad. i wonder if only metamorphaguses can survive that? or maybe only ppl with wands. but teddy doesnt have a wand!!! keep writing

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 17:41
Chapter: Making Luck

Oh cliffie, good thing the next chapter is already up!!! :D i love how harry's getting involved too. keep writing, you are a very talented author!!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 17:25
Chapter: 1: Promises

Great chapter. I loved it so much, just like the previous chapter. this is a fabulous story so far. i loved how victoire is getting involved...

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 16:56
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

Great story. It really is good. I luv that part where it says Tonks marched into her parents house and announced she was getting married. that made me grin since it sounds like her. keep writing!!

Reviewer: juli_dances
Date: 01/07/08 14:10
Chapter: Rhythms

Ahhh! interesting twist of events. I really can't wait until Harry and Andromeda return for their respective sessions with the family. Will any of the Weasleys find out it was Tonks not Andromeda, by the way? And please don't let Penelope die. :( Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 01/07/08 4:23
Chapter: Rhythms

Poor Remus! They are going to need help! What about Hermione?

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/02/08 16:56
Chapter: Family Circus

Oh wow, I though Tonks was going to blow it there for a minute!! Great chapter Keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 01/01/08 17:48
Chapter: Family Circus

haha i loved that chapter (as always) But you had to leave us with yet another cliffie? evil, just pure evil. i love this story, its so original and brilliant, Tonks is so funny. Loved the idea of Tonks pretending to be her mother! who better to imitate than her own mother! I cant wait for a new chapter, i adore this story!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/01/08 8:22
Chapter: Family Circus

Great chapter! I never would have thought that Tonks would pretend to be her mother, but it was great! It was funny to see her reactions to Victorie. She probably is just going by what she remembers of Fluer.
Please, update soon!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 23:14
Chapter: Family Circus

Well I thoroughly enjoyed reading this entire story so far. You did an excellant job with it and I look forward to more intrigue from the Lupins...
Best of luck with the next chapter!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 22:13
Chapter: Consequences

Well, this will be something if Tonks and Remus go out in public. Nice chapter
I think Teddy should tell Harry Potter about the whole affair

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 21:51
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

Wow! What a shame! At first, I could not place Penny Weasley, until Percy's name came up. Then I remember, Penelope Clearwater.
So sad that she died the way she did. Poor Teddy...Great story!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 21:28
Chapter: Damage

Another great chapter! After the initial shock and bewilderment, it seems Teddy and his parents are atarting to get alog, like a normal family.
Still an intreresting read!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 21:09
Chapter: Memories

Fascinating conversation with the Lupins and their son. I'm trying to remember the last chapters of The Deathly Hallows, where Harry was in the Forbidden Forest...I remember his parents being with him and Sirius, supporting him....Whether Remus was there, I don't know. I don't think Harry had reached Hogwarts yet...Or had he?
Anyway, great story, very intriguing.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 18:56
Chapter: In Memoriam

Awwww! How sweet! A lovely chapter..I just wonder how Teddy is going to keep his parents a secret...Nicely written..Very sentimental and sad...I just hope this won't get Teddy into trouble. We'll see what happens.

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 18:28
Chapter: Protection

Kind of reminds me of that movie 'Back to the Future', with Michael J. Fox.
Well, Teddy is realy treading on thin ice here. Another great chapter...Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 12/30/07 18:12
Chapter: Til Death Do Us Part

What a terric tale! Fantastic! I absolutely love it!! Really great writing! I think you did a fabulous job, it's intense and full of drama, and the feeling of you never know what will happen next!
Teddy has a world of explaining to do to his parents...Apparently, they both seem to have their souls intact.
Brilliant work! ;0)

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