Reviews For A Little More Time
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 01/20/08 16:22
Chapter: Rhythms

Horrible cliffie at the end!! Interesting idea about a "ghost full moon" Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: moonstargazer
Date: 01/15/08 16:51
Chapter: Trust

Wow! Great story! Quite a pickle Teddy got himself into. Thank goddness for Tonks' morphing technique.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Harry4Ginny
Date: 01/15/08 15:10
Chapter: For Better or Worse

You know about your cliffhangers!

Reviewer: Harry4Ginny
Date: 01/15/08 13:54
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

Wow. I'm hooked. Excuse me while I read the rest.

Reviewer: juli_dances
Date: 01/14/08 19:05
Chapter: Trust

Ooooo! what if Andromeda came home at that time and they had just seen her and then everyone was like "WHAT???" and OH NO!!! write more soon please before my imagination goes running off with the last line!!! AHHH! thanks!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 01/14/08 16:58
Chapter: Trust

I love love love Remus Lupin! and I love what you do for the character, I can't wait to see more!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/14/08 14:42
Chapter: Trust

that was a very quick update. please keep writing, this is a great story and i really want to know whats happening next!!!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/14/08 9:21
Chapter: Trust

Wow, just when things were starting to get better, they're almost found out...again!
I loved Remus' trust talk, especially how it tied in at the end. One thing, I might suggest splitting up that very long paragraph in the middle of his speech.
Other than that, great job! Please, update soon!

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 01/14/08 7:59
Chapter: Trust

I've decided that your cliff hangers are nasty little buggers. They didn't bother me so much when I was reading "Oblivious" and "Imperius" (I loved them both, btw, they are my favorite fics on this site), but that was because they were both complete and when you left me hanging in one chapter, I could just go to the next. However, now that I am reading this fic as you are writing it, your cliffhangers are nasty little demons that leave my rather frustrated. Argh.

Anyway, I love this story! Except, I didn't know that Tonks was so violent (wacking sticks anyone?), but it's super cute. I love the way you portray Tonks's and Remus's relationship. They are still relatively newlyweds and their flirting is extremely adorable and hilarious. Tonks and Remus forever! I'm really looking forward to the reunion between Remus and Tonks and the other characters. I expect there will be a little comical shock. Although, I can't help but remember that last time I read a big reunion scene in one of your fics, I was hit with Remus's second evil cousin who told him of his approaching arrest (not exactly giggles, you know what I mean?)

Poor Remus. Thirty-five? That's harsh.

Please update soon so I can stop hating this particular cliffhanger and start hating next chapter's.

Reviewer: Meshugganuh
Date: 01/13/08 3:04
Chapter: Prologue: Watching


Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 01/09/08 17:41
Chapter: Rhythms

oh no poor remus! just curius did you actually check some lunar chart to see what the moon would be doing on july 3rd 2018 of did you just put it to chance? either way great chapter. i hope remus gets better soon

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/09/08 14:52
Chapter: Rhythms

poor remus. if i can offer some advice, you put a little too much detail into the throwing up. but i guess you want to make the reader feel like they were there. you showed the characters really well throughout this fic so far. update soon because i cant go on this time!!!

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/08/08 15:54
Chapter: Rhythms

I hope Remus is alright! Really cool to have him just miss the full moon. I wonder what they'll do if they can't help him. it's either St. Mungo's, which would reveal everything, or try to get in touch with Harry.
Please, update soon! I'm dying to know what happens!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/08/08 15:42
Chapter: Family Circus

great chapter. tonks's reaction was expected and comical. the whole chapter was nice. too bad i have to stop for... guess what... homework :'( keep writing!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/08/08 15:19
Chapter: Consequences

uh oh uh oh uh oh... i wonder who it is??? keep writing! i luv it!!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/08/08 14:53
Chapter: Through the Looking Glass

oh dear, i guess he had to be put out of work for a while, but oh dear, poor penny, poor percy. wonderful, at least i get to continue reading!!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/08/08 14:38
Chapter: Damage

oh dear, i wonder what happened? lucky for me, the next chapter is up!!!! wonderful

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 01/07/08 20:50
Chapter: Rhythms

oh no! Remus!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 20:13
Chapter: Memories

hahahahahahahahaha great chapter.. im off to bed now, but at least i got another two chapters in!!! this is a great story, the chapters are descriptive but not too much, they are not too long, and the emotions are greatly described. i wouldnt be surprised if one day i read a fabulous book and it was by you.

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/07/08 20:01
Chapter: In Memoriam

aww, great

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