I really liked the way you worked all of the additional information from Tonks childhood into the story. I can't wait to see what plan they all come up with to save Teddy.
i didnt get an email about this chapter being up, but luckily, as i went to re-read this wonderful story, i saw this chapter! amazing as always, you have a real talent in capturing the emotions perfectly! I love it so much!! i cant wait for an update, once the sites sorted out of course... I cant wait to see how this story progreses! I love all of Tonks past, its fleshing out the character we dont really know, there really should hav been more of Tonks and remus!
I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed one of your stories, but I have come to the conclusion that it needs to be done. Simply brilliant is the only way that I can describe your stories. I've read Oblivious and Imperious both at least twice and can't get enough. Your writing is simply superb. If you don't pursue a career as a writer it would be a shame. I have no more glowing praise to offer than that I enjoy your stories as much as JK's work, and I do not say that lightly. I am considering printing them so that I can have my kids read them along with HP. Simply wondrous! The emotion you put into Tonks looking at the pictures in Andromeda's house and then their reunion... I had tears in my eyes. Expertly done. Truly. Don't stop writing, it would be a crime in this world if you do not have something published.
So many cliffhangers, WHY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Can't wait for the next chapter, I love it!
oh no! poor andromada and poor tonks! i love how fast you update it makes me super happy :) you rock my sox Pallas
That was a very good reunion chapter! I can't wait to see what happens with Tonks and her mother. I'm sure they will convince her soon enough. :)
Ah what an awful cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens next. I like that you did this chapter from Harry's point of view.
OH MY GOD!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! You can't just leave me hanging like that, that's really mean anyway. Good job I'm glad to see no grammar mistakes. You must have a really good beta. Here's to hoping for another chapter soon.
Ohhhhhh this is an EBIL cliffie. I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been enjoying your story from the start, and I'm sorry to say this is the first time I'm reviewing. I really like the way you've written the plot and the characters; it's exciting and realistic. I love the twists, and I can't wait to read how Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny's meeting with Lupin goes. I hope the next chapter is up soon!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man i love and hate cliffies! i am dying for the next chapter please update asap i can't handle the wait!
Awesome chapter. You are a very talented author, your writing is awesome. and the OC names are beleiveable Rowling named. very well written and put together. I loved it!
oh no dont stop here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my heart was pounding in excitement. this is a great story. keep writing!! your wonderful, absolutely so wonderful at writing i cant even find words to express it. your as good as j.k.!! update update update update so so so sooonnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been an avid reader of both Oblivious and Imperius over the past year. You are one of the best, if not the best, writers on MNFF. A Little More Time has been just as engrossing - please continue the excellent work!
This is absolutely the best. Keep up the good work Pallas. Ur writing style is very close to JKR's.
And they finally meet! I can't believe all of the red tape getting in Harry's way, but I hope things work out. Now that they're going to talk to Remus, maybe they will be able to work things out.
Please, update soon!
OH MY GOSHHHHHHHHH!