Reviews For A Little More Time
Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 02/17/08 6:09
Chapter: Homecoming

I really liked the way you worked all of the additional information from Tonks childhood into the story. I can't wait to see what plan they all come up with to save Teddy.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 02/14/08 12:38
Chapter: Homecoming

i didnt get an email about this chapter being up, but luckily, as i went to re-read this wonderful story, i saw this chapter! amazing as always, you have a real talent in capturing the emotions perfectly! I love it so much!! i cant wait for an update, once the sites sorted out of course... I cant wait to see how this story progreses! I love all of Tonks past, its fleshing out the character we dont really know, there really should hav been more of Tonks and remus!

Reviewer: readingislife
Date: 02/11/08 10:51
Chapter: Homecoming

I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed one of your stories, but I have come to the conclusion that it needs to be done. Simply brilliant is the only way that I can describe your stories. I've read Oblivious and Imperious both at least twice and can't get enough. Your writing is simply superb. If you don't pursue a career as a writer it would be a shame. I have no more glowing praise to offer than that I enjoy your stories as much as JK's work, and I do not say that lightly. I am considering printing them so that I can have my kids read them along with HP. Simply wondrous! The emotion you put into Tonks looking at the pictures in Andromeda's house and then their reunion... I had tears in my eyes. Expertly done. Truly. Don't stop writing, it would be a crime in this world if you do not have something published.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 02/09/08 16:34
Chapter: Ghosts

update soon!!

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 02/09/08 10:38
Chapter: Ghosts

So many cliffhangers, WHY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Can't wait for the next chapter, I love it!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 02/04/08 18:35
Chapter: Ghosts

oh no! poor andromada and poor tonks! i love how fast you update it makes me super happy :) you rock my sox Pallas

Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 02/04/08 15:35
Chapter: Ghosts

That was a very good reunion chapter! I can't wait to see what happens with Tonks and her mother. I'm sure they will convince her soon enough. :)

Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 02/04/08 15:16
Chapter: Restraint

Ah what an awful cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what happens next. I like that you did this chapter from Harry's point of view.

Reviewer: hglover92
Date: 02/01/08 18:25
Chapter: Restraint

OH MY GOD!!!! I LOVE IT!!!! You can't just leave me hanging like that, that's really mean anyway. Good job I'm glad to see no grammar mistakes. You must have a really good beta. Here's to hoping for another chapter soon.

Reviewer: Hermione Lurves Ron
Date: 02/01/08 9:53
Chapter: Restraint

Ohhhhhh this is an EBIL cliffie. I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TiedandTrue4ever
Date: 01/30/08 15:23
Chapter: Restraint

I've been enjoying your story from the start, and I'm sorry to say this is the first time I'm reviewing. I really like the way you've written the plot and the characters; it's exciting and realistic. I love the twists, and I can't wait to read how Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny's meeting with Lupin goes. I hope the next chapter is up soon!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 01/29/08 22:34
Chapter: Restraint

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man i love and hate cliffies! i am dying for the next chapter please update asap i can't handle the wait!

Reviewer: weasleytwinsfans
Date: 01/29/08 19:12
Chapter: Restraint

Awesome chapter. You are a very talented author, your writing is awesome. and the OC names are beleiveable Rowling named. very well written and put together. I loved it!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 01/29/08 16:19
Chapter: Restraint

oh no dont stop here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my heart was pounding in excitement. this is a great story. keep writing!! your wonderful, absolutely so wonderful at writing i cant even find words to express it. your as good as j.k.!! update update update update so so so sooonnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Slvr_Otter_Solicitor
Date: 01/29/08 12:38
Chapter: Restraint

I have been an avid reader of both Oblivious and Imperius over the past year. You are one of the best, if not the best, writers on MNFF. A Little More Time has been just as engrossing - please continue the excellent work!

Reviewer: Viveka Brown
Date: 01/29/08 11:39
Chapter: Restraint

This is absolutely the best. Keep up the good work Pallas. Ur writing style is very close to JKR's.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 01/28/08 20:40
Chapter: Restraint

And they finally meet! I can't believe all of the red tape getting in Harry's way, but I hope things work out. Now that they're going to talk to Remus, maybe they will be able to work things out.
Please, update soon!

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 01/28/08 20:15
Chapter: Restraint


Reviewer: BrianG
Date: 01/28/08 17:55
Chapter: Restraint


Reviewer: lostinside1
Date: 01/28/08 16:34
Chapter: Restraint


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