This story has sucked me in from the very start. Your writing is fantastic, your characterisations are spot on and it is all so pleasantly cannon- keep it up - I am enthralled and hanging on for every update- CHAMPION
I really cannot wait to hear the verdict!! This is certainly one of the most interesting fanfics I have ever read and love it! :-)
I'm uber impatient for the next installment - please take that as a compliment not a criticism! I really got my teeth into Imperius and Oblivious, and the fact you managed to finish them, complete with compelling plot twists and great characterisation, is very reassuring...otherwise, I'd be worried that I'd've invested all this time reading week by week, and never find out what happened! I've also got an ulterior motive in that Remus was my favourite character too (the understated suffering! the mystery! the humanity winning through! his new life was just starting! Blah blah blah etc). I'd actually started writing a Remus and Tonks survival story myself, which also used Gemino oddly enough (Bellatrix devises a nasty little projectile combining Gemino and a Portkey - it transports those she wishes to wrack her nastiest revenges on back to bitter Rudolphus - crippled by a cheesed-off Voldemort - leaving a convincing corpse behind. She easily recruits Dolohov's help, as they're having a sordid little affair. The device has a bit of a tendency to cause cardiac arrest, requiring a defibrillating charm and providing a good excuse for Remus to temporarily wander through the forest of death. Things get a bit Stockholm-like, as Rodolphus is quite lonely for a psychopath. After a rather unpleasant year and a half, they escape, in time to join in averting a horrid plot involving Dementors and bring up their alarmingly intelligent toddler). It's not as elegant as your idea, and I'm never conceivably going to finish it, or even get around to submitting a chapter, so I love having access to a convincing plot whereby these two have a chance to carry on their life...I'll be really cross if you kill them after all, by the way! Thanks! Keep writing...
you. have. agonizing. cliff hangers.
i can't wait until you update.
Oh, I hope they'll be alright!
I loved Tonk's tirade! Very cute!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please, update soon!
I have not so patiently been awaiting an update between the site being closed and what not. I almost shrieked when I saw this chapter up! lol. GREAT chapter. Can't wait to find out what is going to happen! EEK!
oh my gosh, great chapter. I was going back and forth from hysterical laughter (Tonk's punching Remus was awesome!) to wanting to cry :( So wonderful.
ahhh i bet you're going to send tonks and remus back. garrrr.
I have loved this entire story, but this chapter, the court scene and the "argument" is just delicious.
Stroking fluffy bunnies and skipping in meadows, eh? Maybe she shouldn't have married him after all...
THAT WAS A JOKE!
*sits and anxiously awaits the next chapter: is it up yet? no. is it up yet? no. is it up yet? no. is up yet? no, etc.*
Wonderful. Wow. Nice. Mugglenet wasn't working all afternoon, so I had to WAIT to read this! Everytime I got an email I prayed it was for this story. It's my main concern right now, being as it's so wonderful. :) Tonks is so cool.
Excellent chapter. Dennis's outburst was very appropriate. Well-written!
Very good chapter. I especially liked Remus and Tonks' fight! The Wizengamot does have a hard decision to make. I can't wait to see what happens next!
OMG! Tonks' tirade was brilliant! =] And Kingsly's reaction to their argument was perfect. Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next! =]
An excellent chapter!! Very well written also.
That was great. Can't wait for an update.
Oooh! Please update soon! I have to know what happens! I really liked this chapter. We all knew they couldn't hide forever and somebody would have to tell eventually. It makes perfect sense that Remus would be the one to come forward. He does like to save people. Keep up the good work!
You can't stop there!! I can't wait to find out what's next. Excellent!
OMG what a cliffie!
Great story! But what a clif-hanger!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!