Thank you for this story! I absolutely loved everything about it - I usually stick to Ron/Hermione canon, but this fic was awesome! The characters fit perfectly and the intricate plot was very Rowlingesque!
Awesome Job!
WOW! This is AMAZING! So amazing I created an account here because I felt I needed to thank you. The storyline and it's time laws with time made more sense then PoA and everyone was in character 100% of the time. You always left on a cliffhanger making me want more. Everything about this fic was just spot on!! THANKYOU SO MUCH!!!
I absolutely love your story! I've been staying up until almost 1:00 in the morning every night to listen to the chapters but I still haven't finished it yet since I only started listening 2 days ago. You are a wonderful writer and I thankyou for doing such a wonderful job!
I just wanted to thank you for a fantastic story. I am a big cannon stickler, and I was so excited to read (actually, listen) to your story and just enjoy it without anit-cannon pangs (and you even accounted for the Audrey thing at the end!). Fantastic character development, and a beautiful story line!
Seriously, you have a talent for writing that is rarely seen on any forum. Which includes me, no doubt. Even as practice, you have struck the mark with an uncanny accuracy. Your despriction just carries...it carries any reader through the pages. Such detail to accuracy. If you ever considered ligting a pen for original pieces (not just fiction), you have a skill here. Usually a piece tends to wan after a while, but not yours. I'm sorry this is like a year overdue, but I search for something interesting before I commit myself to reading it. But I'll get back to reading this piece pretty quickly. Seriously, Pallas, you have a talent here. Don't let it fade.
Hi, I just wanted to let you know, that I've been reading this for Audiofics and it's been incredibly well recieved. This chapter, though, gave me some problems. I didn't have to act any sadness on Tonks' part when she was saying her goodbyes, because I was crying myself. I honestly had tears streaming down my face, and this has to be the fourth time I've read the chapter. This is honestly my favourite fic on this site and I commend you for writing something so original, touching and just brilliant.
I do hope that writing is still a major part of your life, because you have an amazing talent for words. Thanks again for a beautiful story. I am now convinced it's canon and that my favourite pair are still alive.
~Carole/Equinox Chick~
This story is absolutely amazing and I think you are amazingly talented!!!
One of the best! =)
This story is absolutely amazing and I think you are amazingly talented!!!
One of the best! =)
Beautiful story. Awesome in many respects.
Now all we need is a sequel story so we can find out how many more kids Remus & Tonks have, and how does it work when your children and grandchildren are the same ages and go to school together. I'd bet with a little adventure thrown in could be a lot of fun. Just a thought I wanted to throw out if you were bored and had nothing better to do than write that story, lol
Brilliant!!! You write amazing stories! It all reads perfectly rational and reasonable. There is nothing forced or manipulated about what actually happened, the chances of it actually happening, or the reasoning that only a body that was used to changing, morphing, transfiguring, etc. would be able to live throught the process.
Not remembering having read anything else you have written I wasn't sure what your writing style was, so couldn't be sure you would let them stay. Glad you did.
This just keeps getting better. I've been trying to figure out how Remus and Tonks were going to be able to stay, legally, and was pretty sure Penny would have something to do with it. She saw something that will make it necessary to keep them here. And I like your ending.
Only because Remus is a werewolf. Prejudice pure and simple. History is already safe. If they are sent back and the timing is wrong, does that mean Voldy might be able to win? Don't like those odds.
Sorry, I'm with Remus on doing the right thing in this case. Neither he nor Tonks is going to live in hiding for the next 50 yrs or so. Even with Wolfsbane Potion and luckily there is a good potions maker or two in the family Remus needs to transform every month. People would probably notice there were people living with Teddy. This is definitely not an ideal situation. The solution may be around the corner.
Teddy did not change the past. He did however sorta kinda bring two people into the present that maybe should still be dead. He may not have broken any time laws, but he is stretching a few moral lines a lot. Enjoying this story.
Just too awesome for words. This is a really great story. I know how I'd argue. I don't think Teddy would be very happy with me.
Remus is such a hard headed idiot some times.
Another awesome chapter. Your story line plays so real. You make it so easy to visualize exactly what is happening. Thanks for your hard work.
Getting better with every chapter. Andromeda is in for the shock of her life!! Hope she's got a strong heart. We know she's strong emotionally. Onward.
