Reviews For A Little More Time
Reviewer: B Sirius
Date: 04/25/08 11:38
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

I really love this story. It's really well written and entertaining. While reading it, it occured to me that by trying to fix the past the Wizengamot are actually risking changing it. In their current reality, Remus and Tonks never died, everybody just thought they did. It's just like when Teddy is viewing the past and sees the distortion and realizes that his saving his parents was what always had happened to them. They never died. If they send them back to be killed and they are, the reality will be that they were rescued by Teddy, sent back by the Wizengamot and then killed. What if one or both of them aren't killed? If in the present time of your story their past fate was that the were rescued by Teddy and everyone just thought they were dead, how can anyone in the Wizengamot know what will actually happen if they are sent back?

I'm sorry if what I just wrote is completely confusing. Time Travel can really give you a headache if you think about it too much!

Reviewer: MandyMuggle
Date: 04/25/08 11:22
Chapter: Out of Time

Oh Merlin... you have GOT to be kidding me. Remus and Tonks can't die again! This is just a joke or a misunderstanding, right? Please?

Reviewer: Mary Emmee
Date: 04/25/08 10:02
Chapter: Out of Time

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank goodness I read this on my lunch break with no one else around! I don't think my students would have understood why their teacher was yelling and jumping up and down! This can't be! Pallas! Please! Post your next chapter WHERE YOU MIRACULOUSLY SAVE THEM! Please! Please! Please! Post today! POST RIGHT NOW! I am SOOOOOO emotionally involved in this story. In my heart, it's as canon as the books. Don't leave me hanging like this! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 04/25/08 9:27
Chapter: Out of Time

ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!

Reviewer: Luna_Lovegood11
Date: 04/25/08 8:05
Chapter: Out of Time

Bloody hell. You are one mean author. A cliffie AND a bad ending?! I don't want them to die! NOOOOOO! Great story, though I feel like smashing my computer screen in after this chapter. *hopes*

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/25/08 7:44
Chapter: Out of Time

Excellent chapter!!! I really hope that Dora and Remus do not die though, that would be awful!!!

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 04/25/08 5:06
Chapter: Out of Time

NOOOOOOOO!

Reviewer: leighpotter
Date: 04/25/08 5:03
Chapter: Out of Time

I adore this story and I love the way you've dealt with Teddy, he's just the right amount of Remus mixed with Tonks! As for this chapter, I'll admit it, I was holding my breath as I read the verdict...Well done for a brilliant story and I can't wait for more - It's gripping...!

Reviewer: Orchideous
Date: 04/19/08 16:19
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

Ahh! This is amazing. I just read the whole stpry in one go. I've always felt really sorry for Teddy, losing his parents like he did, especially since Remus was one of my favorite characters... The plot and the language and everything is so well though-out and planned. I really hope you continue this, now that we have that huge cliffhanger... Lovely!

Reviewer: HP_Mad_koolkatgrl
Date: 04/19/08 7:09
Chapter: Prologue: Watching

aahhhhhhhhhhhh! evil evil cliffie! please update soon! (by soon i mean now!!!)

definatly the best chapter so far :)

Reviewer: n_n_Heather_Potter_n_n
Date: 04/18/08 20:35
Chapter: Decisions

FINISH THE STORY

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 04/13/08 22:31
Chapter: Decisions

You had better update... like... instantly! I can't wait to find out what happens! You've woven such a fantastic story; I am on the edge of my seat. Excellent!

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 04/11/08 22:48
Chapter: Decisions

PLEASE DON'T KILL THEM!!!! You said at the beginning that this was your way to cope with their deaths, so PLEASE don't kill them again! Pretty please! Good chapter, btw.

Reviewer: Anitra
Date: 04/11/08 22:13
Chapter: Decisions

Ahhhh! You're killing me. I need to knooooww!

Reviewer: hedwig4evr
Date: 04/11/08 17:27
Chapter: Decisions

UGH!! Why must you taunt me with such a horrifying cliff hanger?!?!

"The icy tendrils that had snaked around Tonks' heart tightened harshly..." GREAT LINE!!

Is the next chapter up? Is the next chapter up? UGH! The suspense is killing me! This had better be a quick update!! :-))))

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 04/11/08 17:12
Chapter: Decisions

Oh, I'm glad you posted this right before I went away, but now I'll probably have to wait longer to see what the verdict is!
I hope they let them live!
Great chapter! Update soon!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 04/11/08 17:02
Chapter: Decisions

oh please please please please please please PLEASE update sooooon!!! you can't leave us on a cliffie like this!!!

Reviewer: Faethe
Date: 04/11/08 12:14
Chapter: Decisions

Oh I think this was one of your best chapters so far. I think you captured all of the emotions of Tonks perfectly. I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!

Reviewer: GryffindorGal87
Date: 04/11/08 12:13
Chapter: Decisions

oh! what a mean way to end the chapter! LOL! =] I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! =]

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 04/11/08 8:11
Chapter: Decisions

You can't leave it like that !!!!! What an evil cliffie! But a great story! I think you've captured the essense of Remus and Tonk's personalities perfectly! ; )

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