Another amazing and vivid chapter. Thank you.
Excellent...,Breathtaking. So vivid and so clear. Yo Te Amo Katherine. (no I'm not a stalker, I'm a vivid reader).
Honestly? I was hoping that you would! Great chapter! This is an amazing story, but I don't want it to end!! Sequel?!?!
Thanks for the soon-to-be happy ending! I had faith in you, but your cliffies are always so nail-biting!
Of course I knew it had to be a happy ending! But there were a number of times--every cliffhanger, pretty much--that I held my breath and wondered if there was a way to have a "happy" ending if they were dead, as I was sure they were going to be. I had no clue how you were going to get out of this mess. Wonderful job!
Ok, honestly, I knew you had to let them the live...but regardless, that last chapter still had me in tears...it was so emotional! I've loved this story from the beginning, partly because it's about my 2 favourite characters in the HP series, but mostly because you are such a fantastic writer!
I wasn't really sure what would happen; if they would live or die. But I'm very glad that they'll live!
YAYYYYY!!!! THEY'RE NOT GOING TO DIE!!!!!!!! YAYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! i thought for a second there (but only a second!) that you were actually going to kill them off, but then i thought, "nah, she's going to find some way out of this... i hope" and you did! YAYYYYYYY!!!!!! anyway... update soon!!!
Of course, you couldn't have given them anything other than a happy ending!!! :-)
It was really interesting, why they couldn't go back. That must have been so hard to come up with. Pure genius.
I love Penny and Percy as a couple. They really fit.
It was cool how Hermione was able to possibly wiggle Teddy out of a sentence. I was wondering how they would manage that.
I can't wait to read the epilogue. I'm not sure what that's going to cover, but might there be a sequel? If that's even a possibility, I just want to say I'd love to read it!
Please, update soon!
*looks in the box* I honestly didn't think you would end this badly. It's just not possible. But ANYWAYS!
To be perfectly honest I hadn't a clue whether you'd give them a happy ending or not, and perhaps that is as it should be. A brilliant author alwyas keeps the readers guessing. But I'm so pleased that you did have them live in the end. And I think you really did a good job with all the characters, especially Harry and Hermione. Clever girl that Hermione. Anyway, I've got to go and carm myself down because my face hurts because i'm beaming so much. Hope to read the epilogue soon, and thanks again for such an excellent story.
Pallas - you wonderful person. I can't thank you enough for giving them a happy ending - especially one that they deserve. Thank you, thank you...
Can't wait for the epilogue now. I've fallen in love with this story - Remus, Tonks and Teddy together, after all! - just as I fell in love with the Harry Potter series. And now - I am satisfied.
This story is wonderful. Very well thought-out!
yea! I love happy endings!!!! =] Great job on this chapter and I can't wait for the next one! =]
Fabulous again! I loved all of Tonks' lines. Very canon. And of course I love happy endings!
Wonderful!! You are crazy-creative with your explanation of why it wouldn't work. Impressive! And of course I knew deep down you'd rescue them, but the best part was wondering if you were really gonna do it! Sort of like with JKR and Harry at the end of DH - you can't help but think, "Oh my gosh, she's gonna kill him!"
Anyway, fabulously done. I'm hoping for as many more chapters as you can spit out, and more babies for Tonks and Remus too! =)
I honestly thought you were going to kill them, and that almost made me hate you ... which is a shame, because I absolutely love this story. (And not only because you're letting Tonks and Remus live!) It's very original and well written and ... I am definitly looking forward to reading the epilogue.
Well, I kept hoping you wouldn't "kill" them again. And you dindn't!:)
Awesome job, anyway! Congrats!
you lke deathly cliffies don't you?
this clifie is painfully awesome, you know that right? still keeping my eyes peeled for the next rocked out chapter.
Wow! You are a gifted author, Pallas. I truly enjoy your work. Thank you for sharing! Your characterization is spot on! Only JK Rowling herself could do any better! Your plot is logical, riveting, and intense. I am soooooo personally involved in this story. I am checking daily for updates - no pressure!!! :)