Reviews For Lacrima Serpentis
Reviewer: gryffindork23
Date: 03/03/05 15:40
Chapter: Chapter 6

This is such a dark story. I'm really interested to know what happens next. I was wondering what had happened to Ron. I wonder how everything will sort out. Update soon please!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion
Date: 02/23/05 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 6

Ron... Oh, I feel so sorry for Ron. Now Harry has his friends back. Hopefully that will put him back in shape. This story is so dark. I mean I can picture everything that you are saying. It is also a little scary, nerve racking that is. Poor Hermione. That is horrible because she is now permanently scarred with scar. Well, I am now hooked to this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Arwwww thank you so much. I can see your on my wavelength. I am in a pissed mood because chapter 7 has been "queued" for the past 2 weeks! If you want me to jsut send it (and 8 and 9) then just message me personally, otherwise jsut keep checking back.

Reviewer: irocksuspenders
Date: 02/14/05 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 6

Ohhh, thast juicy. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Keltoi
Date: 02/10/05 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 5

Your descriptions are overwhelming - you've captured the mood *very* well, and your post-climactic world is very believable. I also think your characterisations are excellent. It's obvious that you have a very clear picture of this story in your head - but sometimes the translation to the written word hasn't worked as well as it should, i.e. there are times when Hermione's thoughts and reactions don't come across as clearly as they need to, to maintain the sense of despair and fear she must be feeling. This interrupts the flow of the story a little, and I have to re-read some parts for it to "grab". Looking forward to more - it's in my "favourites".

Author's Response: Hey, thank you very much for your feedback, and I understand what you mean about clarity, it's hard to put across a situation that I dont have any real experience of. I hate to say it but I am getting very annoyed with the amount of time its taking for chapter 6 to be accepted. It is in the queue so just keep checking back!

Reviewer: nicholsone
Date: 02/09/05 11:53
Chapter: Chapter 5

I like it! It's really well written and has a really good and realistic story line even thought it's a bit grusome. Please write more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I have written more but getting the chapters submitted and accepted is another thing entirely. Chapter 6 is on the waiting list!

Reviewer: Pulp Fiction
Date: 02/09/05 11:41
Chapter: Chapter 5

This is good, i like the idea that he who must not be named is in chagre of the things now, its a very different take on things, even tho it is extreamelly unlikley to happen in the books. post soon!

Reviewer: RedHeadMama
Date: 01/29/05 19:02
Chapter: Chapter 4

The story very much fits the catagory. I like the different twist that you have taking. Here's to hoping she can pull it off. Keep writing so I can find out

Author's Response: lol - thank you! I hope I can pull it off, it's a hard thing to write about and make believable, especially seeing as I have to make a lot of assumptions on what tehy'd be like in ten years time. I'll submit chapter 6 soon.

Reviewer: ilovetom
Date: 01/23/05 19:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

i am the first one ok i like this story b/c it shows friendship between Harry and Hermione. It is sad and yet happy so for that I give you *drum roll* a huge NINE!!

Author's Response: thanks. im afraid the next couple of chapters are not going to be happy ones though. i am glad ur enjoying it!

Reviewer: leverystrange
Date: 01/16/05 23:47
Chapter: Chapter 4

I'm not a big fan of 'First person' narratives, but this is great. Pleeeeeaaassseee up date soon...

Author's Response: Neither am I but I found myself writing one. Thank you for your feedback and chapter 5 will be up in the near future.

Reviewer: elfgive
Date: 01/07/05 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 3

first forgive me that i havent read your story before. BUT ITS EXCELLENT please keep writing, i love the trama, that idea of a growned and beated Harry, an island ruled by Voldemort and of course a disolved Order WRITE ASAP         

Author's Response: Thank you. I will post chapter 4 very soon - so keep checking back!

Reviewer: deatheaterbabe
Date: 01/01/05 1:37
Chapter: Chapter 2

Great story!! Keep updating and soon!!!! please check out my first dark/angsty fic Hogwarts Runaway. Much thanx!! keep writing! :) 10

Author's Response: Arwwww thank you. I'm putting the third chapter up very soon!

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