Reviews For Lacrima Serpentis
Reviewer: gryffindork23
Date: 10/11/05 11:37
Chapter: Chapter 15 was great. Loved it.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/30/05 21:03
Chapter: Chapter 14

This story seems to becoming more interesting. I like all the twists and turns that it is making!

Reviewer: Professor Weasley
Date: 09/17/05 21:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Brilliant stroy, loved it, very exciting and adventurs all of my favorite things in reading about the magical world. Hope you update soon, I've noticed in other chapters that it took you a while to update them. I just hope the next one doesn't take long.

Author's Response: It's updated now! lol! Because of exams and stuff earlier in the summer I wasn't able to update but due to the summer break I've managed to stay well up to date - so hopefully you shouldn't be waiting any longer than fortnight *crosses fingers* Glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/12/05 14:47
Chapter: Unlucky Chapter 13

Good to see the story updated. The Legimens lesson was fun to read. I would have thought Hermione would have at least begun to fight the Imperius Curse though. I'm not sure.

Author's Response: Yehhh, possibly. She's got a very weak spirit at the moment, her defence was down and so she was easy prey for Malfoy. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Hel
Date: 09/12/05 3:54
Chapter: Unlucky Chapter 13

Congrats on finally getting it updated! Keep it up, it ROX!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your patience!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The next chapters up so it could be submitted from any time

Reviewer: hp king
Date: 09/11/05 9:57
Chapter: Unlucky Chapter 13

A great story. When is the next chapter.

Reviewer: pgeraci
Date: 08/30/05 8:42
Chapter: Chapter 12

Another wonderful chapter. I like Hermione's internal conflict between her morals and what has to be done. I also like the mysterious Snape loyalties. It adds to the suspense and intrigue of the story. Well done, your writing is excellent.

Author's Response: I'm really glad your enjoying it. I'm certainly going to try and uphold Snape's character as much as possible. It's always fun to write, this one. So please keep reading.

Reviewer: pgeraci
Date: 08/30/05 7:55
Chapter: Chapter 9

Great chapter. I like the scene with Snape and Hermione considering plans to get Harry in to attach Voldemort.

Reviewer: pgeraci
Date: 08/29/05 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 4

This is a great story. I like Hermione's narration and perspective on it. Reuniting Snape, Harry, and presumably Dumbledore for a mission is intriguing.

Reviewer: Hel
Date: 08/16/05 2:54
Chapter: Chapter 12

Yeah...... that's what happened to me too! Anyways... great chapter! very mysterious, i love this story, but i don't really like the new name, but that's just me. keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't say when the next chapter will be up - its been queued for 2 and a half weeks now (if it gets rejected I'll be extremely angry, although it shouldn't because I've gone through it with a fione tooth comb)

Reviewer: saxaphreak
Date: 08/12/05 11:23
Chapter: Chapter 12

love the chapter. when i first saw this on my favorites list...i was like whoa! and then i realized that it was this story! was great! perfect 10 from me!

Author's Response: Thank you! I actually failed to realise taht people were putting my story on their favopurite list - I searched my username and it came up with "no users" (I thought I must be doing crap!) I didn't realise that by changing the name of the story I would have people all confused - but I needed to change the name because "Free the wizarding world" sounded like a corny political campaign slogan! Hopefully next chapter up soon so keep checking back

Reviewer: saxaphreak
Date: 08/12/05 11:21
Chapter: Chapter 11

great chapter! i'm glad it finally got up! love your story!!!! i can't for the next one! 10000000000!!!!

Reviewer: sadako
Date: 08/11/05 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 12

good chapter!ok, i wanted to review because of the title change. when i saw it on my list i was like "what's that?". what does it mean?

Author's Response: I don't think changing the name of the fic is as easy as I first thought it might be. It means "tears of the snake"

Reviewer: jenx3wazlib
Date: 08/11/05 17:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really great writing! Keep it up. =) ps .. Please R&R my story, it's my first fan-fic, so I need as much respose as I can get.

Reviewer: LunaLovegoodDoubleCast
Date: 08/10/05 22:04
Chapter: Chapter 12

This is an awsome story! I just started it and i read the whole thing in 1 night. I like all the titles suggested. I'm okay at titles, but all 1s suggested would b better than mine! I hope Snape is good... Have u decided yet? I was left wondering at the end of HBP. Actually, i don't care as long as Harry wins and 'Mione doesn't go evil (as in true death eater not spy)

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for enjoying my story so much. It is people like you who make me writing it worthwhile! I have actually decided on the ending now (finally)! Obviously I'm not going to tell you *evil laugh*. Keep checking back because one fine day chapter thirteen will actually be approved.

Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA
Date: 08/10/05 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

When are yoyu going to update?

Author's Response: Don't blame me blame the moderators - Ive been queued for two weeks!

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 08/09/05 20:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

I'm actually quite surprised this hasn't gotten more reviews. I mean, I suppose it really isn't something that would have caught my eye, but the writing is excellent. I'm not quite sure I get it yet, but the opening paragraph was wonderful. You could keep writing like that with absolutely no plot and I would just keep reading and reading ... and reading. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The plot has began to finally, after about ten chapters, take some shape. I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far.

Reviewer: dark_soul
Date: 08/06/05 14:25
Chapter: Chapter 12

Wow this is a really good story. I remember when i first looked at it i wasn't sure but now i just want to keep reading. You have to update sooon!!!!!! Andyways i like the last title suggested it sounds cool

Author's Response: Me too. I try to update as soon as the last ones accepted but its been about 2 weeks now....

Reviewer: Morwen
Date: 08/01/05 22:16
Chapter: Chapter 12

Wow, just love the story, it works with HBP even though you wrote most of it before the book came out. Hmm, as for title ideas, I like the whole theme of her slowly giving up perhaps something like Frozen Partings, Tears of Stone, Between Twilight and Darkness, Lacrima Serpentis (tears of the snake)...something like that perhaps.

Author's Response: Wow I like the last one! Hahaaha. Thank you so much for your ideas and your time.

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 08/01/05 16:43
Chapter: Chapter 12

I think that you definitely succeeded in keeping Snape ambiguous. There is no way to know which side he is truly on. For titles...that isn't my strongest part either...but for some reason, Wounded comes to mind. Hermione is wounded from what she did before (in abandoning her friends) and is wounded now by insecurity and having to live as a Death Eater, and everything she truly needs to end.

Author's Response: Thank you for your suggestion. I had to change tact immediatly with Snape having read HBP so I'm glad he still comes across as ambigious because I haven't yet decided what side I'm going to place him on (I really should do some forward planning!)

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