Ooh, this was interesting and rather poignant! Especially the last line - 'Or do I?' It just seems to sum up the whole poem, of someone who is almost questioning his actions but is quickly drawn to the safety of the Imperius curse - I also love the way you discuss death in such an unbeat manner, it works really well!
Author's Response: Thank you- that was a very constructive review, which is refreshing. I also love your username.
Hehe, this was fun! I like the ending, the utterly confused victim having no idea what he even thinks any more. And the childlike tone is cool, it fits this nicely! :) :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I like that you picked up on the tone of it- I was proud after writing it.