Reviews For Imperio, Imperius
Reviewer: tickled_pink
Date: 10/27/07 21:11
Chapter: Imperio, Imperius

Ooh, this was interesting and rather poignant! Especially the last line - 'Or do I?' It just seems to sum up the whole poem, of someone who is almost questioning his actions but is quickly drawn to the safety of the Imperius curse - I also love the way you discuss death in such an unbeat manner, it works really well!

Tickled Pink

Author's Response: Thank you- that was a very constructive review, which is refreshing. I also love your username.

Reviewer: InkandPaper
Date: 10/26/07 18:10
Chapter: Imperio, Imperius

Hehe, this was fun! I like the ending, the utterly confused victim having no idea what he even thinks any more. And the childlike tone is cool, it fits this nicely! :) :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I like that you picked up on the tone of it- I was proud after writing it.

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