wow....short poem. But good!
hats edsakly how i wod fill ifi were in azkaban
wow i love poetry and i think you captured azcaban perfectly, was just wondering can a tanka poem also be called a Haiku ( Cant spell lol)
This was actually so good, but I had to read it twice to appreciste it.
i like the line 'rapt in nothing but sorrow'
You seem to have a extraordinary gift of being able to say many things in very few words. You've really captured the spirit (or lack thereof) of Azkaban.
Er . . . It feels kind of strange to sign off that way right after reading this poem. . . .
I really liked your poem, mainly because I love tanka poems:I read them all of the time!
Anyway, I'm glad that your poem really is a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable poem. I shows that you really tried on your poem and you wanted it to be perfect ... I hope, anyway!
This poem, I think, is so perfect I'm running out of things to say, but I just wanted to let you know that I really liked it. I hope you keep writing poetry, as it seems one of your strong points.