Reviews For Lost Souls
Reviewer: hpreader1
Date: 09/08/08 19:36
Chapter: Lost Souls

Too true.

Reviewer: haydensnape
Date: 05/23/08 16:43
Chapter: Lost Souls

wow....short poem. But good!

Reviewer: LoveHarry_93
Date: 05/02/08 4:31
Chapter: Lost Souls

One word.
Perfect.
:)

Reviewer: love_letters
Date: 03/04/08 16:38
Chapter: Lost Souls

hats edsakly how i wod fill ifi were in azkaban

Reviewer: loony1723
Date: 02/01/08 4:51
Chapter: Lost Souls

beautifully written

Reviewer: HPandGP
Date: 12/12/07 16:26
Chapter: Lost Souls

wow i love poetry and i think you captured azcaban perfectly, was just wondering can a tanka poem also be called a Haiku ( Cant spell lol)

Great work!

Reviewer: greeneyeseverus
Date: 11/18/07 20:13
Chapter: Lost Souls

This was actually so good, but I had to read it twice to appreciste it.

Reviewer: rrraacchh
Date: 11/08/07 19:14
Chapter: Lost Souls

i like the line 'rapt in nothing but sorrow'

Reviewer: Nevilles Girl
Date: 11/04/07 12:39
Chapter: Lost Souls

You seem to have a extraordinary gift of being able to say many things in very few words. You've really captured the spirit (or lack thereof) of Azkaban.

Smiles,
Luna

Er . . . It feels kind of strange to sign off that way right after reading this poem. . . .

Reviewer: Gin_PotterGirl
Date: 10/26/07 20:09
Chapter: Lost Souls

Hello!

I really liked your poem, mainly because I love tanka poems:I read them all of the time!

Anyway, I'm glad that your poem really is a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable poem. I shows that you really tried on your poem and you wanted it to be perfect ... I hope, anyway!

This poem, I think, is so perfect I'm running out of things to say, but I just wanted to let you know that I really liked it. I hope you keep writing poetry, as it seems one of your strong points.

~Michelle :)

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