Reviews For Lost Souls
Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 06/21/12 2:36
Chapter: Lost Souls

That was so beautiful!(:

Reviewer: MaddieTheWizard
Date: 07/02/11 5:53
Chapter: Lost Souls

Wow. That must be true. I will not be going to Azkaban if my life depends on it.

Reviewer: olapepsicola
Date: 05/18/11 14:44
Chapter: Lost Souls

i know its short but its soooo kool

Reviewer: ElmandPhoenix
Date: 04/06/11 12:03
Chapter: Lost Souls


Reviewer: QSnape
Date: 03/13/11 19:22
Chapter: Lost Souls

I come to this tanka poem via the "Top Ten" search. I was looking for the top ten shortest stories, as I'm obsessed with short forms. This is wonderful. You did a great job capturing the feeling of hopelessness. The entire poem is lovely and descriptive. My two favorite lines are lines three and four. And the last line sums it all up beautifully. Thank you for posting this.

Reviewer: AccioPotter7
Date: 02/01/11 12:49
Chapter: Lost Souls

Wow, great work. You should be proud! I really got the "prisoner's take" on Azkaban. Thanks for making my HP day!

Reviewer: lunathewerewolf
Date: 12/28/10 23:49
Chapter: Lost Souls

this is awesome!

Reviewer: KyraLIkesPie
Date: 10/16/10 18:47
Chapter: Lost Souls

U M you missused should be wrapped.
Congrats on being the shortest story.

Reviewer: OtterMoone
Date: 07/25/10 23:38
Chapter: Lost Souls

Wow... Very nice :) ! I would say "epic", but I think that might ruin the mood...

Reviewer: anait1
Date: 07/20/10 6:01
Chapter: Lost Souls

wow...this is really quite touching....i love how "the biting wind howls, echoing the forgotten" and "souls are lost in Azkaban" Quite haunting, i don't think i'll forget it for a while... really good though!

Reviewer: TheQuibler
Date: 04/11/10 6:54
Chapter: Lost Souls


Reviewer: ech1811
Date: 04/10/10 19:45
Chapter: Lost Souls

wow! That may be short, but it was great! Like the people sometimes say, "It was short but not-very-sweet." By the way, I do not mean this rudely, I am just trying to make a joke because I am bored and it's about evil stuff.

Reviewer: SLyThEriNShiP__x
Date: 09/10/09 3:19
Chapter: Lost Souls

not good, brilliant! :)

Reviewer: Ava Marie
Date: 09/04/09 20:46
Chapter: Lost Souls

Funniest thing EVER when I saw Love Letter's comment. I thought she was speaking another language. That was mean. But I do like your poem a lot. This gets the point across very sharply.

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/05/09 23:06
Chapter: Lost Souls

Very true.

Reviewer: 19826harryp
Date: 07/02/09 10:58
Chapter: Lost Souls

Awesome poem! This has an interesting view I wouldn't think of. 5/5 stars from me!

Reviewer: LB22
Date: 04/14/09 5:47
Chapter: Lost Souls

Wow, I never thought such emotion could be found in so few words! Congrats at being the shortest fix ever!

Reviewer: you_know_who_m
Date: 02/21/09 15:25
Chapter: Lost Souls


Reviewer: Magic Marauder
Date: 02/14/09 16:27
Chapter: Lost Souls

that was deep, really deep

Reviewer: beatlemanial
Date: 01/10/09 21:37
Chapter: Lost Souls


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