That was so beautiful!(:
Wow. That must be true. I will not be going to Azkaban if my life depends on it.
i know its short but its soooo kool
I come to this tanka poem via the "Top Ten" search. I was looking for the top ten shortest stories, as I'm obsessed with short forms. This is wonderful. You did a great job capturing the feeling of hopelessness. The entire poem is lovely and descriptive. My two favorite lines are lines three and four. And the last line sums it all up beautifully. Thank you for posting this.
Wow, great work. You should be proud! I really got the "prisoner's take" on Azkaban. Thanks for making my HP day!
this is awesome!
U M you missused rapt.....it should be wrapped.
Congrats on being the shortest story.
Wow... Very nice :) ! I would say "epic", but I think that might ruin the mood...
wow...this is really quite touching....i love how "the biting wind howls, echoing the forgotten" and "souls are lost in Azkaban" Quite haunting, i don't think i'll forget it for a while... really good though!
wow! That may be short, but it was great! Like the people sometimes say, "It was short but not-very-sweet." By the way, I do not mean this rudely, I am just trying to make a joke because I am bored and it's about evil stuff.
not good, brilliant! :)
Funniest thing EVER when I saw Love Letter's comment. I thought she was speaking another language. That was mean. But I do like your poem a lot. This gets the point across very sharply.
Awesome poem! This has an interesting view I wouldn't think of. 5/5 stars from me!
Wow, I never thought such emotion could be found in so few words! Congrats at being the shortest fix ever!
that was deep, really deep