I'd make up a verse but I'm way too crap at rhyming poems! Kudos to you!
I love this poem! It made me giggle, although the line (about George) 'though days as one of two are done' nearly made me tear up...I couldn't believe it when Fred died...
Author's Response: I know...I know...I think I took that death hardest of all, because I was half expecting the others (Lupin and Tonks!...that tore me up, but I was expecting it...)
LOL. Nicely done. I loved Molly's verse, and yes, the Weasleys are quite simply the best fictional family ever. One thing: it's 'fearsome' not 'fiercesome.' Unless you did that on purpose. Other than that, great job.
Author's Response: Oops--fixed fearsome. Kudos for catching that (yeah, it wasn't on purpose...) and thanks for the review!
wow!! creative, n puts out all the emotions we feel abt the weasley family! yay!! good job!
Nice! I usually don't care for poetry in ffiction, but this was actually quite fun to read. I love Fred's stanza, how you express that he died without ever saying so, "Lives on in George's son" and "the days of two are done". Percy's is also really cute. And I love the rhyme scheme, and the way you tie all of them together with the song's theme of king/queen. Very excellent.
Author's Response: Very glad you liked it! I don't much like poetry in fanfiction either, because although I've come across some that just knocks me over, most of it is: "Harry stood at the end of the battlefield/A lone tear rolling down his cheek/A sob escaped him/And Ginny's corpse was by the way at his feet." Or something. Er, anyway, thanks for reviewing!
Simply the best poem I have read on this site! I love the Weasly's and you did their family justice!
Author's Response: ...Wow. Thanks!
Great job, I love the Weasley's!!
Awww!!!!! that was fabulous!!!!! really sweet and totally gets all the Weasley`s!!!!! love this poem!!!!
Aw, this was so sweet! Hee hee, it made me smile ... :D
This is sooooo gooooood! Seriously, I don't know how you captured the Weasleys so well in just one verse each! I love the verses about Molly, Percy, and the twins. You have a nice tongue-in-cheek use of word choice. Though the rhythm may be *slightly* off in Bill's verse, this is some of the most entertaining poetry I've seen on MNFF!
Now, you said extra credit for making our own verses, myess? I may return with another review containing my own verses, but I can't think of anything that matches up to yours! Great job!
Author's Response: I'll look over Bill's stanza, since I tried to make it pretty smooth. Thanks for the high praise! If you make your own verse, you win forever at life. =)
lol! good poem/story thingie!!
omg! i loved that!! i've read the last book, and at the end i threw a fit(not that anyone heard it...) because the three people that die(that are in the Order) are three of my favorite characters!! anyway, great poem!
Fred and George, those silly rascals
Wreaking havoc in Hogwarts castle,
Loyal brothers, to them we sing
Weasleys are our kings!
Author's Response: You win. Have some virtual candy and hugs! =)
kool i luv it
i really like dat u hav included all da weasleys not only ron
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for 1st review!