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Reviews For Standing Here

Name: the_weird_one (Signed) · Date: 10/01/08 22:31 · For: Standing Here
Aww...that's very sweet. I'm glad you made Hermionie italics, because usually that is defined (to me, anyway) as feminine. And boldface and underlining is more masculine to me. I really don't know how that makes much sense. Nice rhyming scheme! I like how in the first line, how you mixed Ron and Hermione's thoughts together. I don't like poems that don't rhyme. So I like your poem.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your review means a lot to me. Italics also seem feminine to me too. I also am not the biggest fan of non-rhyming poetry. Some of it I like, but only if it's written poeticly. If it's not poetic it's not poetry, even if you claim it is. (The Odyssey, to me, is not poetry. It's someone who felt like formatting it differently.) Smiles, Luna

Name: ILRW4 (Signed) · Date: 09/16/08 17:04 · For: Standing Here
You could turn that into a song. I got a tune in my head as I was reading and I turn basically everything into a song.

Author's Response: Ooh! I wish I could hear how it goes! Thanks for the reviews!

Name: ringobeatlesfan4 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 19:59 · For: Standing Here
They are so made for eachother! I didn't catch any DH Spoilers... but I agree with Schmergo, this is perfect! {BeccA}

Author's Response: I had put "before they get together" in the summary and I wanted to be safe. I didn't want to give anyone spoilers if they didn't want them. Thanks so much for your review!

Name: ink_daughter (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 14:05 · For: Standing Here

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: SnivellusLovegood (Signed) · Date: 01/22/08 16:50 · For: Standing Here
aww brought tears to my eyes!!
so good.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: KrumEvilPointyBeard (Signed) · Date: 11/29/07 18:15 · For: Standing Here
You have a power to fell the love in this fic. I really loved how both Ron and Hermione both spoke.
I never read anything like that.
Thank You for the story.
Love, Rebecca Sky

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much! I just felt inspired!

Name: wings_of_hope (Signed) · Date: 11/29/07 9:06 · For: Standing Here
there is only one word to describe your poem

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!

okay, so that was two words, but it really doesn't matter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 11/27/07 20:22 · For: Standing Here
:D OTP = One true pairing.

*shifty eyes* But don't quote me on that.

I love the last stanza. (I didn't mean you had to go out and write one either. *embarassed* But it's awesome, and I do think it closes the poem better.)


Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Name: Euphrates (Signed) · Date: 11/26/07 17:59 · For: Standing Here
That is a very sweet poem. *loves* I love the simplicity about it. It's simple and beautiful. I'd have to agree with Schmergo here and say it's perfect. ;)

I love the style in which you wrote it, as well. It's creative and sort of...breaks the norm? (*rolls eyes at herself*) Also, the way it sounds as if Ron and Hermione are speaking makes it much more powerful, as if we are hearing them ourselves, not listening to someone else speaking for them. The slight rhyme all throughout the poem also 'held' the poem together, in a way, making it flow well.

My only nitpick would be that it sort of lacks a closure. The beginning is beautifully melded between Hermione and Ron, the middle begins to differentiate the two, and then the end separates them completely, as they have their own stanzas. I think that maybe adding another stanza or so, mixing the two together again, would work as a closure better, because the way it is makes it seem like it's...incomplete. Thatís just a thought, though, no need to heed it.

But otherwise I must say I love this poem. It helps that it's also my OTP...


Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I agree with you about the 'lacking closure' part. I sort of had a bit trouble trying to end it. By the way, what is an OTP?

Author's Response: I added another stanza. =)

Name: Phoenix13 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 9:41 · For: Standing Here
I like. A lot. Good job! -Alyssa

Author's Response: Thank you, Alyssa!

Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 10/28/07 14:52 · For: Standing Here
It's beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! They're my favorite couple and this is one of the best poems about them! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! RON AND HERMIONE FOREVER!!!!!

Name: RonandMioneForever (Signed) · Date: 10/26/07 14:57 · For: Standing Here

Author's Response: Thank you! (Love the pen name by the way.)

Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 10/25/07 19:33 · For: Standing Here

That was sooooo sweet and ...sweet. I love it.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really wanted to do something Ron/Hermioine and a poem would be easiest to do.

Name: Schmerg_The_Impaler (Signed) · Date: 10/25/07 19:15 · For: Standing Here
Hehehehe, yay for the poem that I read at lunch a couple days ago! It always makes me feel a bit sentimental. ^_^ My favourite part is the second stanza. I'm glad it got accepted!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I felt inspired. *strikes an 'inspired' pose*

Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 10/25/07 19:02 · For: Standing Here
*sniff* good poem!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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