Reviewer: ink_daughter
Date: 05/03/08 20:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a great poem!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D Reviews make my day.

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 10/22/07 12:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

um Dude how do i make a poem?????

Author's Response: a. i am not a dude- lalalalatinA :) b. no offence but this isn't really the best place or way to ask for help on poetry-- there are many websites and people that I am sure would be glad to help you, and if you want help to write a specific kind of poem, it would be best to go to a website or book source because there are many different kinds of poems and you have to find what you enjoy writing, not what someone tells you to write =D

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 10/18/07 2:42
Chapter: Chapter 1


That was totally hilarious. I loved it. Poor Sir Cardogan is so seriouse and solemn and we laugh our head off.

Oh, and great rhyming too.=Sammy

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. ^^ Poor Sir Cardogan...

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 10/17/07 14:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, that was so very good. I loved the flow and the wording it was beautifully done by an outstanding poet. You truly have a gift with words.

I loved the way that he didn't want to fight with magic, it was so medieval knightish of him, if that made sense.

Again, you are an amazing poet. I hope you continue to write more poetry. This was amazing. Great Job, Haylee

Author's Response: Hey thabks for the review, as always, I appreciate the feedback. I didn't see Sir Cardogan as much of a wand-waving kind of guy. =D

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