Reviewer: Trikergirl
Date: 12/23/11 4:38
Chapter: Endings

Fabulous. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done!

Reviewer: Emerald Fox
Date: 07/09/10 23:59
Chapter: Endings

Love it!

Reviewer: vampqueen
Date: 07/05/10 15:24
Chapter: Revelations

the vampire could be a former death eater like Bellatrix

Reviewer: vampqueen
Date: 07/05/10 14:38
Chapter: Weaknesses

poor hermione but still cool. TTYL!

Reviewer: vampqueen
Date: 07/05/10 14:32
Chapter: Decisions

this is great bye

Reviewer: vampqueen
Date: 07/05/10 14:20
Chapter: Prologue

this is a cool start since my name is what it is

Reviewer: starspark112
Date: 02/14/10 20:19
Chapter: Endings

o my gosh graet fic!

Reviewer: oceaneyes1989
Date: 08/10/08 1:00
Chapter: Endings

I absolutely LOVED this story!!! I had it pegged that it was Narcissa right after Lucius mentioned her missing. I just knew it! Congrats on an excellent piece! ^_^

Reviewer: bookfaerae
Date: 04/02/08 17:27
Chapter: Revelations

omg its lucius's wife isnt it?

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/25/08 10:56
Chapter: Endings

Aww, how sweet...and they lived happily ever after. =D

Author's Response: Thank you for all yours reviews.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/25/08 10:37
Chapter: Revelations

A-ha, Narcissa is the vamp that turned Hermione. LOL

It's a small world after all,
It's a small world after all,
It's a small world after all,
It's a small, small world


Author's Response: It is indeed, especially in this little brain of mine!

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/25/08 10:22
Chapter: Breakthroughs

Mmm, the lovely Mr. Lucius Malfoy being generous to help Severus to help his pet vampire to regain her humanity...I love it! I wonder if perhaps Narcissa suffers from the same affliction as Hermione.

Well written, I'm enjoying this story, thank you! =D

Author's Response: Hmmm... Sneaky, but I cannot tell you yet... I am happy you are enjoying this fic.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/25/08 10:06
Chapter: Contemplations

*SQUEE* OMG, yes, passion is found for them both, and to boot, they found it with each other--YES!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter!

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/25/08 9:46
Chapter: Weaknesses

'He had become soft, too complacent. He had let himself grow comfortable around her. He knew what she was, but he had allowed himself to forget. He was too involved with enjoying the company of a young woman who was not afraid of him, not frightened to tell him where to get off if she thought he was in the wrong.' ~~ Cool, almost sounds like he may be attracted to her on some level. =D

Author's Response: It almost does...

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/25/08 9:07
Chapter: Decisions

Cool, I love how Severus had a hissy fit out of general purposes due to the presence of a vampire, then later when considering the recognition he would receive if he could come up with a cure to vampirism he had to swallow his pride and apologize, sort of, and give in to the Headmistress. *SNICKER--SNORT* =P

Author's Response: Yes, I think the thought of a certain amount of glory would make Snape eat his pride.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/24/08 23:54
Chapter: Memories and Discoveries

Scared the stuffing out of Severus to find a "dead Hermione", hey? LOL *SNICKER--SNORT* =P

Author's Response: I think he may have been a little disturbed, yes.

Reviewer: Wistful_Stargazer
Date: 01/24/08 23:35
Chapter: Prologue

Aww, poor kid, what happened to allow this to become her everyday self?

Author's Response: All shall be revealed!

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 01/22/08 3:15
Chapter: Endings

awwww that is such a touching ending... it brought a smile to my face. Wow I've got to say I admire your imagination and ability to create a totaly believable story. Thank you so much for combining HP and vampires - two of my favourite story types together!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that high praise. I hope to live up to those standards in future fics.

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 01/04/08 23:48
Chapter: Prologue

Alright, I must admit that this story has an interesting, original premise. Who'd ever thought of Hermione becoming a vampire?

But, my enjoyment of this fic pretty much ends there. It moves quickly- too quickly to be natural- and the dialouge is dust flying off carboard cutout characters. There seems to be only one way each character can act- Hermione can only be a stereotypical 'vampire trying to be good' and Severus can only be, well, the stereotypical fanon Snape.

Don't get me wrong- the story's got promise. If you can breathe life into your characters, slow down the action and paint believable words and scenes, you could have an amazing fic here.


Reviewer: Fang91
Date: 12/14/07 18:02
Chapter: Endings

I really liked your stort, it was well made. i'd love to read anything else you've written.

Author's Response: Thank you. i am working on a story currently, an I hope to add it here soon!

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