Reviews For Life Begins
Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 10/07/07 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was quite well done. There were a few verb tense and infinitive errors, but these didn't detract from the story. Overall, I thought the emotions were very vivid. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll try to keep a closer eye on things in the future. Maybe I can clean up the grammar some.

Reviewer: lizhasredhair
Date: 10/07/07 17:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

really good

Author's Response: thanks.

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 10/07/07 16:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

The beginning of your story is accurate and marvelous.I think that you have describe very well what have happened to Harry and Ginny.You are a good writer and I hope you will post a new chapter very soon.We need to know what have happened after the chapter 36 in the DH.Keep writing.

Author's Response: After reading DH the first three times, I couldn't let go of Ginny & Harry. This is part of my closure for the end of Chapter 36. Thanks

Reviewer: leigh194
Date: 10/07/07 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

hi great first chapter, thought the scene between harry and ginny was brilliant and i am looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: thanks, hope to update soon.

Reviewer: hgfanatic
Date: 10/07/07 10:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh my gosh.
this is totally going to my faves!
pleeeease write more!

Author's Response: I hope to have more out soon, I work full-time and have four kids, so my computer time is sometimes limited.

Reviewer: quick_quotes_quill
Date: 10/07/07 9:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

very good

Author's Response: thanks, for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: K J Cadwell
Date: 10/07/07 1:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sweetie, this fic just about brought me to tears, and I'm hardly a crier.

Your style needs a bit of smoothing out, but it's nothing a bit more writing can't fix. Keep writing! Pretty please?

Author's Response: thanks for the review. Hopefully, things will smooth out some as I go along.

Reviewer: azziecat
Date: 10/07/07 1:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is one of the better fics I have read here for a while, will definitely be one that I follow.

Author's Response: thanks. more to come soon, I hope

Reviewer: Lily_n_James
Date: 10/06/07 23:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice story. But it will have non-consensual sex? If it's Ginny or a major plot or just mentioned plase tell me.I tend to get sentimental when that happens but sometimes it makes a great story. I just wanted to know so I can buy some tissues.

UPDATE SOON!

~*~Wendy~*~

Author's Response: I'm still not decided on the non-consensual sex yet. It will probably be in later but I haven't gotten all sketched out yet. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: JoharinNebarSephrite
Date: 10/06/07 22:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was incredible. Your description and emotions is amazing you've really captured the characters. Keep writing

Author's Response: thanks, i have a lot planned but we'll see how fast I can get it out.

Reviewer: lily16
Date: 10/06/07 21:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow. this was the best post-battle fic i read yet. i love how harry couldn't sleep in the begining, it was very realistic.

i also loved all the emotions. Especialy the fact that evryone was still sad. i think the best part was when harry walked around the castle- you wrote the very well :)

hope there's more!

Author's Response: The walk around Hogwarts was one of my favorites. Harry just had to say good-bye. Chapt. 2 is with my beta. Thanks for the review

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 10/06/07 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love this -- you captured both emotions well. I'd love to see this continue

Author's Response: thanks so much. I hope to have chapt. 2 up soon

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