Good story line, I hope the next chapter isas good as this one.
oh wow, i think this is realy good
please say you're writing more
this is one of the best harry potter storylines i have seen so far, i luv that harry i going back to the dursleys to end things, i never felt like there was enough closure with them, write more soon!
Ahhhh I love this. Write more please (:
aw, that was a very sweet beginning! Nice work!
- you did live up to the first chapter!!!! You have captured the characters so well - looking forward to the next
- you did live up to the first chapter!!!! You have captured the characters so well - looking forward to the next
- you did live up to the first chapter!!!! You have captured the characters so well - looking forward to the next
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I cried almost all the way through it! I am STILL very emotional about the deaths of all the characters.....
Great!!! Can't wait to read next chapter
Seems to be a good story, I hope you finish it.
aww that was awesome! Your really talented!
haha i got a laugh out of this: first, I’m scared of your mum
Author's Response: I have always loved the way that JKR is able to throw in a laugh at some of the most serious moments, so I was going for that. Also, Mrs. Weasley can be a bit scary.
I can't wait for the next chapter! update fast!
Author's Response: I'm doing the best I can. Chapt 3 is almost ready and I'm about halfway through chapter 4
Very good. Continue. I am looking forward to it.
Author's Response: I hope to have the next chapter up soon. My beta is reviewing it now.
This was a very good chapter! That was some conversation.
I love Harry's nobility with the Dursleys.
Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Harry is noble, I think he's doing this more for himself and maybe his mum
That was really good. I can't wait to read the next part. I really liked how we got to see Ginny's anger in this.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm trying very hard not to write Ginny as a wimpering/needing protection type.
