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Name: hpobsessed4ever_23 (Signed) · Date: 06/17/08 17:05 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
why don't people ever update on here?

this was sooo good.


Name: satina (Signed) · Date: 06/09/08 7:16 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
the next chapter, please


Name: marvelousmeg (Signed) · Date: 10/13/07 22:43 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
Hey,
I loved the story. Julia seems a bit strnag but maybe she's just shy. I was hoping you'd answer a question: Did he inherit his father's lycanthropy????
anyway, good story. Keep posting :)


Name: boobacat (Signed) · Date: 10/13/07 5:04 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
This is made of win! It's grate and i can't wait for more!
And it's about Teddy!
*yay*


Name: hpobsessed4ever_23 (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 16:03 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
i really like this.
especially since its about teddy lupin, i'm happy you have written a fanfic about him, because i've been wanting someone too!
well keep with this, because its amazing.


Name: Leahr (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 19:16 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
A good start. No huge events seem to happen and yet your style is compelling, and the dialogue is good, that's always something hard to pull off. Keep it up!


Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 17:26 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
great story!! update soon!


Name: dumbledorefluertwins (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 17:00 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
I'm going to start off with two crits, 'cause I'm mean like that.

First, Teddy's full name isn't Theodore - it's just Ted. Honestly. I know someone called Ted, and I'm sure if it was actually Theodore, it would be mention in the books, and they would also call him Theo, instead of Teddy.

Secondly, I don't think Harry would exactly know which compartment Teddy was going into. ;) They always search for compartments in the books, so I don't think that they are given one.


Name: PinkNymph (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 16:08 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
Awesome story! It's great, I really enjoyed it, and Teddy Lupin is really sweet! The only thing is you've got a couple minor spelling and grammar mistakes but overall I'd give the story a 100/100!


Name: wodcdre (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 14:43 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
A very promising start. I could just visualize your story as I was reading it. Very detailed, yet it never bored me. Good work!!


Name: GinnyPotter808 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 14:03 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
Teddy has friends!!! Oh, I'm so happy that someone did a humor fic on Teddy's Hogwarts experience! Keep writing!
-Susan


Name: moonstonesilver (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 12:49 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
Wonderful! Just like I felt on my first day at school!
:D :D :D Psst.. Hey - lemme guess - Teddy like Julia? :P Hehe. But then, things can take an interesting turn, can't they? :D


Name: lowveldgirl (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 5:42 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
Very well writeen I'm hooked!! Please update soon


Name: hermybabay82 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 4:51 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
I can't wait to read more! Well written.


Name: lilyevans489 (Signed) · Date: 10/10/07 4:27 · For: On the Hogwarts Express
Great Job! I'll have to keep an eye out for updates.... Keep Writing!


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