Reviewer: hpobsessed4ever_23
Date: 06/17/08 17:05
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

why don't people ever update on here?

this was sooo good.

Reviewer: satina
Date: 06/09/08 7:16
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

the next chapter, please

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:43
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Hey,
I loved the story. Julia seems a bit strnag but maybe she's just shy. I was hoping you'd answer a question: Did he inherit his father's lycanthropy????
anyway, good story. Keep posting :)

Reviewer: boobacat
Date: 10/13/07 5:04
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

This is made of win! It's grate and i can't wait for more!
And it's about Teddy!
*yay*

Reviewer: hpobsessed4ever_23
Date: 10/11/07 16:03
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

i really like this.
especially since its about teddy lupin, i'm happy you have written a fanfic about him, because i've been wanting someone too!
well keep with this, because its amazing.

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 10/10/07 19:16
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

A good start. No huge events seem to happen and yet your style is compelling, and the dialogue is good, that's always something hard to pull off. Keep it up!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/10/07 17:26
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

great story!! update soon!

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 10/10/07 17:00
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

I'm going to start off with two crits, 'cause I'm mean like that.

First, Teddy's full name isn't Theodore - it's just Ted. Honestly. I know someone called Ted, and I'm sure if it was actually Theodore, it would be mention in the books, and they would also call him Theo, instead of Teddy.

Secondly, I don't think Harry would exactly know which compartment Teddy was going into. ;) They always search for compartments in the books, so I don't think that they are given one.

Reviewer: PinkNymph
Date: 10/10/07 16:08
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Awesome story! It's great, I really enjoyed it, and Teddy Lupin is really sweet! The only thing is you've got a couple minor spelling and grammar mistakes but overall I'd give the story a 100/100!

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 10/10/07 14:43
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

A very promising start. I could just visualize your story as I was reading it. Very detailed, yet it never bored me. Good work!!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 10/10/07 14:03
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Teddy has friends!!! Oh, I'm so happy that someone did a humor fic on Teddy's Hogwarts experience! Keep writing!
-Susan

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 10/10/07 12:49
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Wonderful! Just like I felt on my first day at school!
:D :D :D Psst.. Hey - lemme guess - Teddy like Julia? :P Hehe. But then, things can take an interesting turn, can't they? :D

Reviewer: lowveldgirl
Date: 10/10/07 5:42
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Very well writeen I'm hooked!! Please update soon

Reviewer: hermybabay82
Date: 10/10/07 4:51
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

I can't wait to read more! Well written.

Reviewer: lilyevans489
Date: 10/10/07 4:27
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Great Job! I'll have to keep an eye out for updates.... Keep Writing!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
FEATURED
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.
CATEGORIES