why don't people ever update on here?
this was sooo good.
the next chapter, please
I loved the story. Julia seems a bit strnag but maybe she's just shy. I was hoping you'd answer a question: Did he inherit his father's lycanthropy????
anyway, good story. Keep posting :)
This is made of win! It's grate and i can't wait for more!
And it's about Teddy!
i really like this.
especially since its about teddy lupin, i'm happy you have written a fanfic about him, because i've been wanting someone too!
well keep with this, because its amazing.
A good start. No huge events seem to happen and yet your style is compelling, and the dialogue is good, that's always something hard to pull off. Keep it up!
great story!! update soon!
I'm going to start off with two crits, 'cause I'm mean like that.
First, Teddy's full name isn't Theodore - it's just Ted. Honestly. I know someone called Ted, and I'm sure if it was actually Theodore, it would be mention in the books, and they would also call him Theo, instead of Teddy.
Secondly, I don't think Harry would exactly know which compartment Teddy was going into. ;) They always search for compartments in the books, so I don't think that they are given one.
Awesome story! It's great, I really enjoyed it, and Teddy Lupin is really sweet! The only thing is you've got a couple minor spelling and grammar mistakes but overall I'd give the story a 100/100!
A very promising start. I could just visualize your story as I was reading it. Very detailed, yet it never bored me. Good work!!
Teddy has friends!!! Oh, I'm so happy that someone did a humor fic on Teddy's Hogwarts experience! Keep writing!
Wonderful! Just like I felt on my first day at school!
:D :D :D Psst.. Hey - lemme guess - Teddy like Julia? :P Hehe. But then, things can take an interesting turn, can't they? :D
Very well writeen I'm hooked!! Please update soon
I can't wait to read more! Well written.
Great Job! I'll have to keep an eye out for updates.... Keep Writing!