Reviewer: hpobsessed4ever_23
Date: 06/17/08 17:05
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

why don't people ever update on here?

this was sooo good.

Reviewer: satina
Date: 06/09/08 7:16
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

the next chapter, please

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 10/13/07 22:43
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

I loved the story. Julia seems a bit strnag but maybe she's just shy. I was hoping you'd answer a question: Did he inherit his father's lycanthropy????
anyway, good story. Keep posting :)

Reviewer: boobacat
Date: 10/13/07 5:04
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

This is made of win! It's grate and i can't wait for more!
And it's about Teddy!

Reviewer: hpobsessed4ever_23
Date: 10/11/07 16:03
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

i really like this.
especially since its about teddy lupin, i'm happy you have written a fanfic about him, because i've been wanting someone too!
well keep with this, because its amazing.

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 10/10/07 19:16
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

A good start. No huge events seem to happen and yet your style is compelling, and the dialogue is good, that's always something hard to pull off. Keep it up!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/10/07 17:26
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

great story!! update soon!

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 10/10/07 17:00
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

I'm going to start off with two crits, 'cause I'm mean like that.

First, Teddy's full name isn't Theodore - it's just Ted. Honestly. I know someone called Ted, and I'm sure if it was actually Theodore, it would be mention in the books, and they would also call him Theo, instead of Teddy.

Secondly, I don't think Harry would exactly know which compartment Teddy was going into. ;) They always search for compartments in the books, so I don't think that they are given one.

Reviewer: PinkNymph
Date: 10/10/07 16:08
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Awesome story! It's great, I really enjoyed it, and Teddy Lupin is really sweet! The only thing is you've got a couple minor spelling and grammar mistakes but overall I'd give the story a 100/100!

Reviewer: wodcdre
Date: 10/10/07 14:43
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

A very promising start. I could just visualize your story as I was reading it. Very detailed, yet it never bored me. Good work!!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 10/10/07 14:03
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Teddy has friends!!! Oh, I'm so happy that someone did a humor fic on Teddy's Hogwarts experience! Keep writing!

Reviewer: moonstonesilver
Date: 10/10/07 12:49
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Wonderful! Just like I felt on my first day at school!
:D :D :D Psst.. Hey - lemme guess - Teddy like Julia? :P Hehe. But then, things can take an interesting turn, can't they? :D

Reviewer: lowveldgirl
Date: 10/10/07 5:42
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Very well writeen I'm hooked!! Please update soon

Reviewer: hermybabay82
Date: 10/10/07 4:51
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

I can't wait to read more! Well written.

Reviewer: lilyevans489
Date: 10/10/07 4:27
Chapter: On the Hogwarts Express

Great Job! I'll have to keep an eye out for updates.... Keep Writing!

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