Wonderfully imaginative as always. I came looking for a Six Roses update (hint) and found this treat instead. It's so nice to see your view of what happens behind the scenes.
Hello, fellow ‘Claw’, I have to first say, wow! This was an amazing account of Kreacher and Regulus, and the reasoning behind stealing the locket.
Having Kreacher be the one who took care of Regulus and watched over him when no one else would was great. I think until he was older Sirius might have been a bit better of a brother, but having Kreacher do it fits.
Knowing what and where Kreacher went and did with Voldemort is crucial to stealing it back, and I liked how you had him tell the story, without actually telling it. Regulus knows what he has to do, and even though he had pledged loyalty, he loved Kreacher and wanted revenge on his behalf.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and although I have never really cared for either character, this was such a nice representation of them; I might just change my mind. Great job and good luck! Ravenclaw for the Cup!
*whimpers in corner* I promise to always be VERY nice to your dogs...
Interesting , the way you have Regulus's thoughts about this developing. You have built a nice basis for the love between him and Kreachur here.
Do you think he would really have recognised that his act was one of youthful stupidity, rather than mere bog-standard stupidity?
I like your view on how the locket was 'replaced' good story.
Another exceptional piece of writing. You truly are gifted.